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xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 10/9 Really not surprise that neji got distracted by tenten. Think out of all the Konoha12 girls, she has the most feminine facial features...if only, we got to see her hair down in the series haha |
ParrishGranger chapter 1 . 10/1/2017 awwwwwww |
liepah chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 can't imagine Neji the genius lost the words... kkkkk |
wondertwinkies chapter 1 . 3/14/2017 Lol I could imagine Neji being this flustered. Kudos! I loved it! -asiantwinkies |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2016 Lmao at a stuttering neji bless him lol really cute story |
Nairil chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 This was lovely! I liked that it was written mostly from Neji's POV. Such a story warms my heart and makes my day! Thanks! |
Amasian chapter 1 . 8/29/2016 Thank God you posted something fluffy to sedate that gaping hole in my heart after your other NejiTen story! Thank you for such kindness 3 This was a terrific pick me up :) |
Mitil Tenten chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Sua história está muito linda! Parabéns! |
Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 4/20/2016 My favorite part was the talk between Hiashi and Neji, it was very emotional with Neji remembering his father. Also I really liked how you described their first kiss. Great story :) |
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 4/11/2016 Neji alive is good to see and the build up to the kiss is nicely done. I see Neji and Tenten are not ones to waste time once their affections are known. I'm sure Hiashi is sort of glad he didn't have to 'advise' Neji during courting after their first rendezvous. More than a splash of tea would of occurred I'm sure. So glad you're adding story after story. Thanks for sharing. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2016 omg i loved loved loved loved loved this story! keep writing! |
SilentMidnight2 chapter 1 . 4/8/2016 This was really cute. I enjoyed reading this. I hope that you write more nejiten stories. Great work :). |
This Modern Glitch chapter 1 . 4/8/2016 Pretty darn cute :) |
Kruwela chapter 1 . 4/8/2016 OOOOOH WOW THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! I love the ending! It's soo right! and everything fits well perfectly! I noticed some mistakes tho (spelling and grammaring) but other than that. Really Good bruh! I hope you make a next chap about Neji telling Hiashi anout it and put a little Hanabi in it (I LOVE HER SO MUCH) and maybe throw a wedding and maybe a few Neji and Ten minions? (giggle) Hope you do it :D IM OUT, PEACE Yd0o0bY |
readwithcats chapter 1 . 4/8/2016 Aww...So cute! I loved it~ |