Very good and nicely finished.

War maiden from that anime isn’t it

good work

I dislike that there's the music box because well uzu has been destroyed for years and everyone thinks there dead so why all of a sudden randomly a bandit is carrying the music box that is useless except by weakening the void powers that's just stupid.

Holy fucking shit this was good I fucking just don't know what else to say fucking good job tho

Of course you didn’t kill Sasuke , are you scared of killing off characters or something and what’s the point of having all that power if he’s just gonna pass out just using one of his abilities

I can’t read this it’s so boring . He gets alllll this power but he’ll barely use it until he destroys Konoha which in my opinion is a shittt plot. This story is just lemons and s godlike naruto that will barely use his powers and how the hell or why the hell did you make him 6’5 while being 14 god damn years old. I can tell you’re short if you’re imagining being that tall for a young age. The logic with these character in Konoha like Sakura and Hinata is regarded as well. “Omg what made him leave” stupid ass , it’s so cringe and adding Hinata too was just even stupid not that I care but it just doesn’t make since like why does she even like Sasuke to begin with and why is she acting like a slut . Was it too break naruto in this story as much as possible? So dumb . He’s getting all these powers but will have no need for them . He goes to uzu and doesn’t even do shit to rebuild it. And all he’s going to do is relay on his void power and he doesn’t even practice with it . Such a lame story

Having his body filled with cracks just makes him ugly as fuck and stupid . I can’t imagine some “godlike badass being” that you’ve been putting up looking like his skin hasn’t gotten any water . Just from this I lost intrest. And you’re making people worship him as a king and such but he has no mentality for that crap. And he wants is revenge and plans to kill people for his own cause why would people want to trust their lives on an 14 year old child. He doesn’t even know what to do with Uzu like why not have him go to wave first to get some builders or have him exercise or something because he must be skinny as shit. He was in a cell for 4 months tourtured with barely anything to eat so how the hell does he go from that to out running hunter nins and being perfectly fine. He hasn’t even ate from what I can tell . I just imagine a skinny white haired boy with bags under his eye and a bunch of cracks and scars on his skin . Just ruined it for me but that’s my opinion

Every ahri is going to be slut huh

Sweet story you did great

why is hinata a hoe .-.

Damn that's insane. Why would you just have Hinata become Sasuke's whore out of nowhere like that?

Like that legit hurts my heart in almost a physical way.

One second she's completely and totally in love with Naruto.

Then she brags to him how she isn't a virgin anymore and she attacks him repeatedly.

I'll keep reading because this is a very interesting crossover, but I just wanted you to know how much it hurts me, as a NaruHina fan, to see Hinata act like this.

I hope she's just under a really powerful genjutsu or loyalty seal or something.

is Ahri from League of Legends and what ever happen to ino

interesting concept but IMA have to pass on this story... a touch too... I'll think of a complaint if I start rereading this another time :p

I think I found a big error in the beginning of your Story. During the Retrievalmission tayuya is wounded and left to die. But after 4 month of imprisonment naruto finds her and she is still alive. Also you it is quite unlikely that no uprising Happens after kiri and suna are integrated in uzu. Your story is good, but it could be better.