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So third chapter, Ruby decides to let Jaune die in the illusion after just watching his partner die and now she's evil? I have no idea what's going on anymore.

The final part of the chapter gives me an odd feeling like something unexpected is going to happen soon.

That just seemed to easy of a defeat something's up.

I wonder when the Neptune characters will show up.

A brilliant mix of classic narrative from RWBY and the new direction of Neptunia, this story does a great job of making the reader feel as though the crossover was actually written by Rooster Teeth. The story wastes little time in making it action right from the first few sentences of the narrative, it changes things up by starting fast then repeats a pattern of calm tones into action tones with the surprising twist in the middle. The characters are immersive and we get their motives within this first chapter. It almost feels like i've already read in the middle of the story when it's literately the beginning. Looking forward to seeing this story develop into something great in the near future.

8/10

Okay shit is about to hit the fan.
Wonder what going to happen next.