I am really liking this story so far. have not seen any issues yet, so thats a good thing. Only nit pick I have, is that its short. other then that good job!

Oh, Nick! Never and iean EVER ask "How Bad can it be?"

Great story so far thinker, keep it up! I'm happy that I found ur story and will happily support it from now on. Anyway alot has happened from Nick and Judy discovering and becoming Renn's guardians to getting involved in their current case. This does indeed sound worse than the nighthowler case that those two solved prior. I have no doubt that Nick and Judy will solve this one but the question is how long will it take? To the ominous question ya just asked, that's never a smart thing to say in this situation Nick. That kinda question could lead to bad things. Guess we shall see what happens. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Clawhouser turning down DONUTS? Now ya Know things are falling apart.

Enjoyable story. As long as doesn't take a Sharp Turn Left and have the kid turn out to be a robot or mutant or such, lol. Hopefully, you'll have time/energy/ideas to continue this storyline past chapter 12 (which I'll start in a few mins) or make a part 2?

The only slightly off thing was Ducky. He (or at the Earth Version) works with Naval cases, and rarely do we see interaction with "regular" cops. I realize, tho, that it's Zootopia, therefore they Probably don't Have a military, thus he Couldn't/Wouldn't be bound by "Regulation xxxxx by ggggg" or whatnot. Keep up the good work, don't worry about those that might complain about how long it takes, School First, Fun Second!

Peaceful sleep. I'd give almost anything for that most of the time. Even tho I haven't jumped ahead, I can guess the kid will be what finally helps link up Nick and Judy. Excellent work! Keep up with schooling tho. I bailed out of college after 2 semesters meself, got busted up lil at a time in 1/4 century offshore, and now can't even flip a burger! Good luck with endeavors.

I'll be honest. Story is going very well, I have no complaints at all. Also honestly, even the Briefest author on here has 1000% More Backbone than I do, as even if I Could write imaginative stories, I wouldn't DARE put them out here! Nope, no way, no how, no when!

Are you going to update it or is that it Because it’s a pretty good story And be a shame if you don’t continue with

The story is definitely worth the wait, I'm glad you've updated it!

the wait is worth it:D

So worth the wait, keep up the great work :)

I see that Renn cares very deeply about Judy and Nick's well being.
You did a great job on this here story, TheThinker29.
Keep up the good work and never give up on this story, no matter what.

My new character

Name: Jackson R Colt

Age:28

Job:marine Marsoc status active. Wears normal marsoc gear but with sunglasses black Balaclava and the camo is a light a dark shade of black. imgres?imgurlhttps%3A%2F% .com%2Fvi%2F0bBQ-WgIZik% &imgrefurlhttps%3A%2F% .com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D0bBQ-WgIZik&docidSLFPAw4sbuVmeM&tbniduKSqAOL3vOxNvM%3A&vet1&w480&h360&clienttablet-android-verizon&bih601&biw962&qmarine%20marsoc&ved0ahUKEwin0_zG49LSAhXH6CYKHemiBasQMwg9KAIwAg&iactmrc&uact8

Does have flashbacks of all his squad mates dying in a op gone wrong

He his also inhumane (without compassion for misery or suffering; cruel)

Height (yes I know it's tall) 8.4 feet

Stupid links.

If foxes are counted as preditors than humans darn should be, fox meat tastes great!