Nice one

Buen capítulo, la idea de Ichigo y Grimjow trabando amistad gracias a rukia estuvo muy buena, me está gustando el cierre de tu historia, espero que puedas actualizar pronto pagar seguir leyendo. Gracias por el cap y suerte.

Great chapter once again! And now the long awaited soccer match is here! Looking forward to seeing the next chapter!

Was so excited to see this story updated after the end of the last chapter! I liked how you worked glimpses of Rukia’s past into her visit to the orphanage and the jerk they encountered as they left. I’m looking forward to seeing what Rukia’s plan is and how the boys factor in. Are they going to tail her? Or be there more for moral support and on stand by until needed? I bet Byakuya is going to pull some strings to give Rukia as much protection as possible. I’m still excited to see what happens at the soccer game! And even more so what happens after! I hope whoever wins the match won’t effect Ichigo and Grimmgow’s teamwork/whatever they are going to do following the game to help Rukia. I’m really curious about Rukia’s mom and what is in Kyoto. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Finally the misunderstanding was cleared! I really love the bond between Hisana and Rukia, so it's a good thing that all is fine between the two.
Damnnn... Can it be just IchirRukiGrimm? Lol. I am so greedy. I feel bad for Grimmjow tho, he also deserves someone, and his loyalty towards Rukia is outstanding. No wonder Rukia likes to hang out with him. And Grimmjow's father was adorable! My goodness, he's also smitten with her huh?
I guess, we'll have to wait what will gonna happen next, I don't have any idea what's Rukia's plan. But I am glad that she wants to avenge her mother and sister. I hope tho that she'll come out unscathed after her confrontation with her father, she had suffered too much.
Anyway, thank you so much for updating this story! And ofc, we'll definitely hang on. Wishing you more creative juices in your brain, and writer's block would not come your way

omg, Thanks for answering me! It was great, I was worried about Rukia the whole chapter

Yes, I really liked it. I look forward to the next chapter.

That fucking matron needs to go to jail. Maybe the Kuchikis can call authorities on the staff that runs the place and have them all sent to jail or something. That could be how Hisana and Rukia can help out the kids at the orphanage: become patrons or something. I'm assuming Byakuya's got enough power and pull with the right people the orphanage can be fixed up, maybe the whole system can be reformed. If they manage to do that it could even have a positive effect on the neighborhood as a whole. And from there I could see the entire east side becoming revitalized and the people living in the area will start feeling like things are looking up. Then maybe there wouldn't be so much resentment coming from the east siders. *shrug*

Anyways, I feel bad for the kids at the orphanage. My heart breaks just thinking of how shitty living there is. That Koichi person and his minions need to pay for what they did but I also hope they can redeem themselves. They probably never had to pay the consequences for their actions but I also believe they're a product of their environment. I'm glad Rukia broke his damn nose though. Fully deserved! I hope she also broke that damn matron's nose or left her with some kind of injury that she'll never ever forget. Thank goodness Rukia found what she was looking for and got away with minor injuries. Also very happy the boys aren't too beat up. I'm worried about Ichigo having a concussion. I hope when he's okay. Someone should've said something about that. I know Ichigo didn't want Isshin knowing what they were gonna do but I really hope Hisana called Isshin and told him to keep an eye on his son.

Gaku and Grimmjow deserve happiness. I don't remember their backstory or if it was mentioned but I wish them nothing but good. Maybe Hisana can pull some strings in their favor.

Glad Hisana wasn't as upset as I thought she was going to be. I'm sure she's just happy all 3 are, for the most part, okay. Byakuya probably made sure he was knocked out so he wouldn't have to deal with her. XD

I've got a feeling things aren't gonna go as smoothly with Makoto as Rukia plans. I think somehow the boys will get separated from her. Because Makoto's a rat and I don't trust him at all and he's desperate and he'll have some kind of plan to make sure Rukia is alone. I mean, it would be poetic justice if Rukia and Hisana both finally bring down Makoto together. But especially Rukia because she needs to finally close that chapter of her life. *sigh* I hope I'm wrong though and that she isn't separated from Ichigo and Grimmjow. But what the hell is Makoto up to? Like, what does Rukia have that he needs for her to come back with him? He's not gonna sell her off, is he? That bastard better not lay a hand on her! Ugh! Just thinking about it is pissing me off.

Anyways, I hope Ichigo's team wins, if only for the sake of Renji confessing to Tatsuki. But I wouldn't be surprised if Makoto does something before the game ends and the teams never finish it officially so it'd end up a draw. Maybe that's how he gets Rukia away, by kidnapping her before the game ends. O_O I'm excited for the next chapter! Thank you for the update. :)

Oh my goodness they're did it at last kyaaaa and I swear I ... Didn't cry when she read a latter from hisana ... Nooo I am not crying I man it ... , The ... She and makoto going to Kyoto just two of them gaahhh no away please. Thanks for the update love you :-)

Hello!

I'm glad they're alive after going into that adventure. It was surprising they actually had problems, since I thought nothing was going to happen (they're actually pretty lucky).

I think it wouldn't be easy for Rukia to be out there with a broken hand, because that HURTS a lot.

I'm glad Rukia found her sister's letter, but I think it would have been easier if Hisana just went there and asked for it, isn't it? lol

Whatever, I'm happy Rukia obtained that pic of her mother, because at least that way she could know how actually she looked like. It's different with Hisana because she met her mother in person, but Rukia never had that opportunity, which is sad, can you imagine not knowing how you mother looked like? it tearful.
I don't really know what Rukia is going to do, but I hope it's not something wrong. Makoto is someone dangerous and I don't think it's a great decision to reunite with him. And I don't get why Hisana allowed it, it's not really a good idea.

Oh I'll do it sometime (read your other story), it's just that I'm working rn (even in quarantine), so I don't really have too much free time. I spent my days doing stuff and barely can review fanfics, even less read them.
I hope you can continue this story soon!

Hi there really like how intense u made this chapter , I can't wait to read the next chapter. Amazing work and yes I also read rebellious novice it has me laughing at some scenes that's how good a writer u are to me. I enjoy reading ur work keep it up.

You have a great music taste, I’m looking at the titles of each chapter now ;)

Very good story, one of the best.
Hope you update soon.

Oh dear! What shenanigans will be going down! At the end of their late night adventure I hope no one gets seriously hurt, Rukia finds the letter, and maybe Grimmjow and Ichigo are on better terms than before. With this much drama happening I wonder what the soccer game is going to be like!?

Ah so that is the revenge plan. I knew that she was going to try to get between Ichigo and Rukia, but I didn’t expect her to choose this route. Very clever!