Hey, um. I think you need to reupload the chapters. They're glitched out

Maybe you should add another tiny minor oc that's like a store owner that takes any stolen goods you have and gives you double the price then they would be originally be if you sold them...also he could just be another surviver from wherever abyssa came from or not you do you...also he could probably had been friends with abyssa before the whole accident before the event of her island...just a friendly suggestion but you can do this if you want to

So you included some of my little bro's fav YouTubers in this. Good job.

I would PM you but.
The thing is.
I can't.
Mostly because.
I don't.
Have a.
Account.

Yo.
I read a bit of your story and saw the comment about on how you didn't care that Harmony was a Marry Sue. And I just think the reason why so many people find the Marry Sue thing a promblem, well for me, is that it makes the story so... Boring or not as engaging.
The reasons for it is because; you know how Harmony can use spells, tame familiars, and is happen to be a thief? Well you just made Oliver, Esther, and Swaine pointless. Like what's the point of them being around, other than Oliver is the Pure-Hearted- One? Not Much. I mean you could also as easily make her the chosen one, making them all point less.
Another thing which is a promblem, is that Harmony seem to know what happen to Allie/Alice as in she was there when it happens. Which breaks the twist that the game have. I mean if you wanted that, then that's fine. I just find it... Bad, in my opinion.
These are all just my opinions, feel free to argue, just know that these were the promblems I find in the story.
Oh! And another thing. There is another sing of a Marry Sue that I don't really find much as a promblem is that, Harmony being related to that Kingdom that was destroy by Shadar (forgot the name of the kingdom). If done well, it would have been interesting. Which sadly wasn't the case here with your story...
Well if you want to reply to me, just leave a note on one of your chapters that you're gonna update. So we can talk a little bit more.
Until then have a wonderful day.

Please don't abandon the story! I love it so much!

Love the chapter as always! And yay! Martha and Ten are probably my favourite! （）

Thanks for updating! I love this story sooooo much! As for the Doctor Who/Ni No Kuni crossover - LOVE THE IDEA! Doctor Who is my favourite TV show followed by Supernatural and Ni No Kuni is my favourite game! And any idea which incarnation of the Doctor you would be using? I would love to see Abyssa matched with 10. And her sassy attitude would really counteract 9's And the "Tales of Wonder" story sounds really cool.

Love this story! Please don't forget about it :(

Have to admit, I'm getting pretty worried now due to the lack of updates. Please don't abandon this fic! But take your time!

Nice update! Also, has anyone noticed that Drippy croaks Rarebit, Rarebit as in Welsh Rarebit? Please tell me I'm not crazy and that I'm not the only one who noticed that. Swain also croaks Robbit, Robbit. Very clever Level-5. Anyways, awesome update and I hope for more!

Nice update! You really know how to update quickly! Fun fact anyone notice that Drippy croaks Rarebit, Rarebit as a frog? Rarebits are a Welsh thing. Drippy has a Welsh accent. Please tell me that I'm not crazy and the only one who noticed this. Also Swine says Rob-it. Very clever Level-5. Anyways, I hope for more to come!

Yay, Abyssa get's to drive! Nice update Ms. Hatter!

Hi the code is back can you please fix it?

The code is back from chapter 5, you need to find out what's causing it.