| Reviews for Ending The Pain |
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Lady Shadow92 chapter 1 . 4/20/2018 Wow that was truly sad, poor judy losing nick like that, good story though |
DeadProductions chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 Well, that ended positive |
techno02 chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 very nice job |
Keemstar chapter 1 . 5/20/2017 Sucide is badass |
hellion117 chapter 1 . 1/10/2017 You ma man... are almost along the lines of Mr Mead... dam good writing almost had me crying... dam good writing keep it up mate |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2016 I loved this so much! I love tragedy XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2016 Great keep it up!Also I hope that was just a nightmare. |
VictorTheOmega chapter 1 . 4/20/2016 Suddenly... Judy wakes up panting and sweating realizing that it was only a nightmare. She lookes over to her left to see none other then Nick himself...with no wounds what so ever! She looked around, noticing that she was in her own room, her own bed. Snuggling up to her forever mate. Whe blushed deeply as Nick pulls her closer and whispers in her ear..."I love you carrots" She lays on top of him and dreamily sighs "I love you to, my sly fox." She reaches further and plants a kiss on Nick's Lips. But little did she know that there was a small smile that streached across the fox's muzzle. They were not dead...abd they will never die, because of their undying love for each other...and the fact that they were secretly immortal...(Stay tooned to find out why in my major project...coming soon...I think). Amazing, sad, and beautifuly made! Sorry I just can't stand such a sad ending. ;( ...-VictorTheOmega-... |
purplefurora chapter 1 . 4/8/2016 This is actually really good. |
Quiley chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 I really enjoyed that story, and I hope you could write another one. |
Major Wolf chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 This is what you would call a beautiful sadness. Depressing as hell, but had a true and beautiful meaning to it. This was well written, nice job. ~MW |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2016 Good lord I just cried reading that the intyre time |
Guy chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 Very tragic, heartbreaking, yet warming knowing how Judy would risk everything to be with Nick again, especially her own life. Good job on this, dude. :) |
RegretfulRNR chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 I feel like a dick for saying this but... intentions is spelt with an I |
wow chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 I don't know if I'm glad I read that or if I regret it. Probably both. That was very touching in my opinion. The sentence structure could be improved, but besides that, good work. My heart was racing a little in the end there. Not going to lie I had a bit of a hard time taking a breath after that last paragraph. Just. wow. |