Wonderful.!

I Love it Good job.

FUCKING HELL WHAT?!

I wanted to cry but I had to bottle it up, I wish it was longer but I appreciate your story.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOÒOOOOOOOOOOOO

Hahaha I’m such a badass rebel look at me I’m an edgy cool kid

I found product placement. lol

DNA doesn't aloows them to expand then where the hell does the baby grow? assuming baby will have mass and it will occupy space and since all other body parts already take all the space, where the hell will baby mature before birth?

You can do a copy right thing on any more. just have your name the date published just say copy rights owned by... published... that way if any one tries to do it you can actually go to the people who run the website and they can delete the copy and they will punish the one who stole it. But i loved the story, little hard to follow at times, but it was great. do you have have one where Mon-El and her found a way to be together and a have a kid? if not that would be awesome. But seriously loved the story, couldn't stop reading, big FANFIC nerd, but massive Marvel DC geek in general. so this is like heaven to me. This is the first superhero fanfic i've read. it's awesome. two thumbs up

As a Floridian, I am 100% okay with what Frenza is doing in this chapter.

That is so unfortunate. It really is disappointing when people do this. I'm really sorry this happened to you.

You go girl! Show em who's boss!

What the heck 2019 uhh no I think u mean 17 yeah

Hahahaha

Who TOLD HIM