Anyone there?

You do realize that even if they have different mothers they are related through their father, right? So they ARE blood related...

"I-Is there something wrong Elesis?" should be 'I-is', "Y-Yeah," is "Y-yeah,", "...now that it's almost Valentine's Day." needs a ?, "We both turned to the purple-haired mage." is 'red-haired knight', there should be a line break before Elesis's PoV and later Elsword's PoV, "is eh talking about some kind of chemical potion," is 'she', "Is...nothing." is 'It's', "I think she'll be find afterwards." is 'fine', "They all showed their small present boxes" is 'both', "T-Thank you..." is "T-thank you...", "D-Don't get the wrong idea!" is 'D-don't', "S-Sure." is "S-sure.", "did they looked well-baked?!" should be a period, "mine was red" is 'green', "H-Hey," is "H-hey,", "N-Nothing!" is "N-nothing!", Rena' PoV needs an 's', "You looked like you saw or thought of something embarassing. needs a ", "W-What?!" is "W-what?!", "even though I'm trying to clam down." is 'calm', "R-Rena?!" is "Rena?!" and "she hugged me tight." is 'he'.

Loved it! Please continue to update this story, it was great and I appreciate how much work you put into it!

what a good story, plz upload more often :D

Missed one: "S-Slow down a bit," is 'S-slow' and "What did you get Eve for?" is supposed to be "What did you get for Eve?".

"elsword asked as he was eating a candy bar." is 'Elsword', "you'll fat." is missing 'get', "the elf got a older sisterly side," is 'an', a line is needed before Rena's PoV, "W-What?!" should be "W-what?!", "W-W-Wait!" should be "W-w-wait!", "W-Well," should be "W-well,", "Do you want to join the El Search Part Club?" is 'Party', "Ah ah ah," should be "Ah, ah, ah,", "I scolded the him" doesn't need 'the', "W-What?! O-Of course not!" should be "W-what?! O-of course not!", "What did you get Eve?" is missing 'for', "H-Hey...!" should be "H-hey...!", "juts like my sister once did..." is 'just' and "Glad to have you on the El Search Party Club ," has a space.

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Please update soon

One more time I guess? "we ran to the where we got to the sewers" sounds off like it's missing something.

D'oh! Left this one too, "You're good a befriending," is 'at' and the "we ran to the where we got to the sewers" part isn't fixed.

Oops, I left two out, "we ran to the where we got to the sewers" sounds off and the El Search Part Club is missing a y.

"Hers eyes were gradient orange." is 'Her', "Her hair had a small sliver hair band" is 'silver', "But surprises me most" is missing 'what', "but something about sounds a little bit off," is missing 'it', "Talked about a crowed." and "when she turned to the crowed." is 'crowd', Her face looks almost like stone." should be "Her face almost looked like a stone." (and needs a " in the first place), "She the suddenly turn to the alleyway," is 'then', "No way! I literally saw Eve go this way! There's no way we can be wrong!" I think Aisha said that, "R-Right!" is "R-right!", "It's not supposed to look to..." is 'so', "I'm already ready to go with you, Elsword." sounds a bit off, "I'll go," needs a 'too', "Me too." is "Me three.", "The most important is;" is missing 'thing', "But what does that have to do in Elder Junior High School?" is 'with', "Maybe or maybe not, but we can't let Elrio go into chaos can we?" is 'Elrios' and that could've been Elesis talking and "before it lost sigh of us." is 'sight'.

I was actually trying to guess whether or not it was Eve and something tells me Add's the mysterious mastermind trying to take over Elrios.

No I mean there's another 'club' in the El Search club (it's this one that's confusing) Party Club, also; TOOHIGH is missing a space, "One of the teachers stated" make that 'shouted', "W-What are you doing here" is 'W-what' and the lines I mentioned before (or whatever it's called) are still not here.

That reminds me: the lines before a character's PoV are missing. All of them in fact.