Reviews for Marked
vamp-fiction-fan chapter 38 . 7/26
This has been such a ride. I have a love hate relationship with how it all ended because it basically means 99% of the 2 stories ends up being undone... Still, a very imaginative way of dealing with the conflicts and I do love that you did that in a way that means Hermine gets to keep Harry and Ron, and Draco gets to keep Theo and Narcissa in their lives
life.is.an.awful.waffel chapter 39 . 7/25
The amount of times you made me cry is ASTRONOMICAL, still thank you for writing this. If half names were changed you could sell this as a book and I would 10/10 buy it.
Cmontress29 chapter 38 . 7/24
This was a great story! The premise of the relationship of necessity to a deeper connection was great. I LOVED the twist in Hermione and really enjoyed that plot line. I was rooting for her unhinged wrath and love, and somehow still righteousness. I just hoped she got a grip and things leveled out and she somehow got Draco back!
The twist with the timeturner and Dumbledore’s past attempts was totally unexpected and an original idea! I hated that they had to be apart for so long before finding one another again, but it was a great story. I really enjoyed the characterization of Snape and Theo in this as well. It added another dimension to their characters which was necessary given the help Hermione needed. 10/10
eldritch chapter 27 . 7/23
hey! i really like how you portrayed the entire thing. the way hermione and draco came together and his friendship with harry. but i feel you overlooked a serious plot of the rowling's story. hermione would never ever give anyone priority over harry. and she could not even think for a second that harry does not need her and that she can just turn her back to him. its like you seriously overlooked hermione's most important trait and that is her loyalty and friendship with harry and ron. in this story, you clearly want to show her inclination toward draco. but the thing is that hermione would actually kill for harry, and die for draco and ron. because hermione found a brother and family in harry. and as far as i have understood the books, harry and hermione are soul mates. not lovers. but siblings. you really should not have overlooked her friendship with them. because hermione may leave draco, but she could never leave her harry. rest was brilliant. i really liked how you developed draco and harry's friendship. good job.
AC24 chapter 38 . 7/21
Omg thank you so much for sharing this with us. I mean I was skittish on how you would end this with a HEA but I said to myself you know what just trust her and thank god I did. Marvelous really, keep up
Gypsyheart12 chapter 38 . 7/21
I binged clean and marked in the last 72 hours.. and now I want dudleys story!
these were amazing and unique and I loved them.
i wonder if we could get an alt ending where they defeat voldy but snape manages to give them the memories from all their timelines, similar to the good place, maybe?
either way love, love, love!
BellaStoria chapter 38 . 7/20
I thought I'd read all of your stories, but somehow I'd missed this series. It was amazing! Thank you!
K chapter 37 . 7/18
F*cking ouch. My heart.
lilpenguin01 chapter 29 . 7/15
crying silently in the corner... don't mind me
lilpenguin01 chapter 11 . 7/14
I really wish I could favorite this multiple times. this is so well thought out, its been greaf
Juriya chapter 37 . 7/6
Wow this was a very realistic way to end. A little sappy on the soulmate stuff, but I won't deny that I like happy endings. It felt very neat.
Juriya chapter 36 . 7/6
This was pretty sad, but it does conform to my canon-compliance criteria yet I find I'm still not happy haha. Maybe that's how Dramione will always end up though; bittersweet.
Juriya chapter 35 . 7/6
This was such a mind-f*** of a chapter; loved it.

Not gonna lie, I was kind of worried for a bit at the direction the story was going. I wasn't fully on-board with the Hermione becomes a "conduit" of pain and the Minister of Magic due to grief over losing Draco. Even her still speaking to Draco kind of felt corny. Her also killing all those Death Eaters felt sort of overpowered? Borderline a bit cheesy, in my opinion. Typically, this is why I prefer Dramione relationships to be avoid interfering directly with the canon story (or like, squeezed AROUND the canon). But I gotta give you major credit, you are THAT phenomenal of a writer (and clearly a very critical thinker too) that some of this actually felt believable and rooted in canon. For example, the explanation given here at how important Hermione is to slow Harry's obsession with Hallows and how Malfoy is an accelerant to her intelligence was seriously brilliant. Some deep analysis and absolutely spot on, I imagine. I noticed you pay close attention to things like this early on when you made sure to mention that Malfoy can compartmentalize his feelings, a pretty minor detail I believe JKR said once.
CRoseSing chapter 36 . 6/26
Genius, but sorrowful. I didn’t think the fulfillment of second prophecy was going to be the end, and I suspected Death meant something about time when he told Hermione to aim bigger, but I definitely did not see this coming. Excellent twist. Can’t wait to see what happens in the last few chapters.
KD1030 chapter 2 . 6/26
The conversation between Draco and Harry is fantastic. Love it.
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