Reviews for Divergence
AlternateInverse chapter 13 . 5/8
Will you be updating this anytime? I don’t see that many Suzaku time travel fics and I love this!
Mr. Page chapter 13 . 5/25/2019
Interesting chapter. To see Gino and Anya treating Japanese with actually humanity. They're good characters, if not unfortunate. Being subservient to the Emperor, they have to follow his will. And poor Anya is deprived of her own precious memories. Maybe things will turn out better for her.

Anyway, it looks like this is where the story has come to a halt. Thank you so much for writing it and getting this far at least. It was a fun read and I look forward to continue reading if you ever add more chapters in the future.

Take care and stay creative!
Mr. Page chapter 12 . 5/24/2019
The plot is starting to heat up. The P.U.A.B. is steadily growing into a new dangerous enemy, and speaking of which, the Black Knights may soon have a double-agent in their ranks.

The original timeline is more-or-less finished right now, but there's still the possibility of similar events playing out. In which case, Shirley, Euphie, and other people that Lelouch and Suzaku care about may soon be in danger.

Also, two Knights of the Round are coming to Japan? Gino and Anya (or, if you want to get smart: Tall, Cocky, and Arrogant, and Woman within a Woman).

The story is really evolving. I see a lot of great potential. Keep on being creative! :-)
ssj3gohan007 chapter 13 . 5/24/2019
Great story! I love it! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
Mr. Page chapter 11 . 5/24/2019
Excellent chapter! Jeremiah's back in the action, Lelouch and Suzaku on both teamed up, and Lelouch's has gained the trust of his Black Knights. I loved the dialogue in this chapter. The explanation about Lelouch's reasons was especially good.
Mr. Page chapter 10 . 5/24/2019
So Lelouch and Suzaku are up-to-date on the same page now. The timeline is now irreversibly changed. What will happen and what won't? Who will live and who will die? Who will join and who will turn?

And how will Lelouch live knowing all the things he knows now? Will he be able to look Euphie and Shirley in the eyes? Can he and Suzaku still save them from their fates? And what will become of Bree?

For some reason, I can't help but find her cute.
Mr. Page chapter 9 . 5/24/2019
Oh, dear, this doesn't sound good. . . .

But it's too soon to give in to despair. Let's see if Lelouch and Suzaku can get out of this.
Mr. Page chapter 8 . 5/24/2019
Mrs. Kozuki was truly a strong, brave woman. All that abuse, yet she stayed just so she could be with Kallen. That's a mother's love at its strongest: standing through the storm to stay with and keep her child safe.

Another thing that's terrible about Refrain is that Britannians can use it as an excuse to demonize and ridicule the Japanese, saying they're drug users. I wouldn't be surprised if some Britannians secretly distribute the drug to abuse their power and strengthen their prejudice. And once their clients start taking the drug, they can hold them to it either through their addiction or "obligatory debt".

All the more reason why we shouldn't hold too strongly to the past. It leaves no room for new happy memories. . . .
Mr. Page chapter 7 . 5/23/2019
Hmm . . . Bree's planning to steal Suzaku for herself? Sounds like a female Mao. In fact, I wonder what will happen if the mind-reader meets the future-gazer. THAT would be something to read about.

Another good introduction for the Black Knights. Good to hear Lelouch cares for Euphie.
Mr. Page chapter 6 . 5/23/2019
I think it was a good chapter. It's good to see Suzaku knowing what his Geass is now, seeing as it saved Shirley.

And Lelouch's defeat at Saitama wasn't a total fiasco this time around. All in all, I say the story is going well so far.
Mr. Page chapter 5 . 5/23/2019
Suzaku's taking his role as "voice of reason" seriously. It's good to see he's putting his knowledge of the future to good use. Let's just hope he doesn't slip too early.
Mr. Page chapter 4 . 5/23/2019
Oh, Euphie! Wonderful job with her. I love her so much.

I wonder when Suzaku will use his Geass again, and more importantly, HOW he'll use it.
Mr. Page chapter 3 . 5/23/2019
Very good job. I can see Suzaku has already begun his role as Lelouch's voice of reason.

He's right. Trust is crucial with followers. And trust will be what's needed if he and Lelouch are to change things for the better this time.
Mr. Page chapter 2 . 5/23/2019
Interesting idea about Suzaku's Geass. A life-span number seemed like the most logical idea. It kind of reminds me of the Shinigami eyes from "Death Note."

I think Suzaku's idea will be either confirmed or denied when he sees Euphie's number. All he has to do is count down the days leading up to the date of the Special Administrative Zone of Japan and compare it to Euphie's number. Then he'll know for certain. I'm sure that day is painful engraved into his mind. . . . I, for one, hope and pray Euphie survives this time.

Either way, it's interesting to see Suzaku try and plan things out. Usually, it's Lelouch who keeps his memories in these sort of stories.
Mr. Page chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
YES! Another Re-Do Rebellion story! Only this time it's from Suzaku's POV. That's strangely fascinating. And I wonder what his Geass does. What kind of information does it yield?

You've got me interested! Let's see where this story goes.
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