Reviews for He Is Power Untamed
Yokai Watch chapter 4 . 10/3/2017
When you will put up "Slice in Life" story? I really want to know more between Predaking, Dreadwing and Lyra.
Yokai Watch chapter 4 . 2/3/2017
When are you gonna have Slice of Life on? It has been a year already.
Yokai Watch chapter 4 . 1/5/2017
I was thinking that maybe you could put up a little fanfiction of Lyra and Dreadwing.
Origingirl chapter 4 . 12/23/2016
Can't remember the last time I read a ficlet that made me shed tears. It's not often you see a story that can incorporate a well written and in character OC that just blends in with the already existing characters as if they're meant to be in the story. Also, props on the romance. Lots of fans and fics out there give the impression that you need interfacing to make the story stick, but this is simply not the case. I thought it wonderful how slow this couple was willing to take it to ensure that their relationship remained strong, and the light touches, small kisses, and one or two intimate moments were enough to show just how in love Predaking and Lyra were with each other. This is a work of art. Truly, it is. I couldn't think of a single element that needed revision (other than typos, but we all make typos). I'd love to see how you could further expand these two in another ficlet. Perhaps set when Cybertron is getting back into relative order. I'm not trying to sound pressuring btw, I'd be most content with this story being a stand-alone mini series without a sequel. However, I wouldn't oppose another fic elaborating on their story either.
Thank you so much for writing this Jem.
Predaking was definitely my crush in the series along with Wheeljack, Dreadwing, and a few others. I wish he'd gotten spotlight in RID 2015 like Soundwave did, but sadly it was not to be.
Thank you so much, again.
You really have a talent at character design.
- Origin girl
(PS: if u ever need assistance with any future works, Biette advice ideas or elements related to those, PM me :3)
Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2016
Can you make a oneshot for Predaking and Lyra! I'm dying for a romantic one shot between these two every time they spend time together they're interrupted!
Crissillis chapter 4 . 10/5/2016
Awe that was so cute! I LOVED IT! XD XD XD XD XP XP XP
Guest chapter 4 . 10/3/2016
Oh my gosh please do a one shot for LyraxPredaking they're just so cute!
Emma214 chapter 4 . 9/27/2016
i very loved it and really enjoying Lyra and Predaking together alone.
my ideas were; Predaking mates with Lyra and have two sparklings, both dragon-like shaped and coloured orange and black. Megatron tries to get one of the sparklings and Arcee becomes Darksteel's mate. You can use my OC dragon named Saphira, her body is sky blue with red striped wings. she is caring and kind but her beauty lures Megatron in love with her.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/26/2016
Cool! Is there a sequel to this story?
GirlWhoLovesAnime chapter 4 . 9/26/2016
Well I loved this, you have blended everything together so perfectly! It was like I was watching a bonus episode of TF:Prime Beast Wars! *gives 10 cookies*
Guest chapter 3 . 9/22/2016
Hopefully the lovers will reunite in the next chapter! I honestly love your story and I can't wait for more chapters
Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2016
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
Smackarooni chapter 2 . 9/1/2016
Is there a chapter 3. If so It's not showing it, I noticed someone else had commented about ch 3?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2016
Wicked Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
Gry20 chapter 3 . 8/18/2016
Hey, hope you don't mind if I share a few ideas: After Ratchet tells Predaking the truth, Lyra has a look at some of the files in the ship's database. As she comes across the truth herself, she gets ready to go and tell Predaking. However, Starscream stands in the doorway, and after a few words between them, Starscream shoots Lyra. After Lyra falls to the floor, Starscream leaves, satisfied. However, had he stayed long enough and checked, he would have discovered that he missed Lyra's spark, but still left her wounded. Holding her wound, Lyra leaves the room to go and find Predaking. But instead, she finds Ratchet, who decides to take care of her wound. After doing the best he could, Lyra goes to find Predaking. While Megatron, Optimus and all the others do what they do in the episode, Lyra manages to find Predaking.
And after reaching Cybertron, as Predaking, in his dragon mode, flies away, we see Lyra riding him.
And later, as Bumblebee, Arcee, Bulkhead and Smokescreen searches for Predaking, they hear Lyra humming to herself, and after asking her where Predaking is, Lyra turns around and whistles loudly, and Predaking appears. And as Predaking leaves to see for himself about the two other Predacons, he tells Lyra to wait for him. And as Starscream, Shockwave and the two Predacons appears, Lyra goes into hiding, but watches from the shadows. And when Megatron/Unicron appears and makes an undead army of the dead Predacons, Lyra hides away from sight. She comes out when Predaking returns.
And as the three Predacons, with Lyra riding on Predaking, flies to help the Autobots fight Megatron/Unicron, Predaking drops Lyra of on the ship, where Lyra finds her way inside and asks Bumblebee and the others if they needed a hand.
And later, after Megatron tells Starscream that the Decepticons are no more, as he leaves, he happens to pass Lyra. As he's passing her, he pats her on the head. Time slows down a bit as Lyra gets a flashback from back when Megatronus helped her out of slavery, and of Megatronus giving her a pat on the head when she tells him she wants to join him. Time goes back to normal for Lyra when Megatron's hand leaves her head, and she watches as he flies away. Then, seeing Starscream flying off, Lyra runs after him, which can be when the Predacons returns up from the path to Primus's core, with Predaking flying down to let Lyra jump on. And after catching up with Starscream, Predaking tells Lyra to go into another room while he and the other two Predacons have a 'words' with Starscream.

You then decide how the rest goes. You don't have to use these ideas if you don't want to, but if you like some of them, you can always shape them into your version.
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