Be careful about issues like content and legalities, but more Snowbarry is great. And, if you can take the hate you might get from some, I encourage all to make their disappointment with things like the progression of the show known in many ways, including by sending feedback and reports of harassment to The CW and DC Entertainment and taking part in the #BringBackTheOriginalTeamFlash movement.

Though I'm not a snowbarry shipper (gosh I really am picky when it comes to who I ship, XD) and I much prefer seeing Barry to be the center of stories, I think that this is an interesting concept. I would pay attention to grammar though. There are several missed words and run-on sentences that are kind of distracting.

"...a girl in a black cloak with the hood up." This sounds a bit too awkward. Try something like "a hooded figure, cloak blowing in the wind, stands watching her." That way it sounds much more ominous and there's a bit of motion so it sounds like part of the story and not like a painting.

"The only indication that she is a girl is that she is wearing white sneaker wedges." This sentence really doesn't need to be in here. It's probably the most awkward sounding one. I'm really confused as to how the white sneaker wedges are an indication of her gender? Are those some brand of women's shoes? But that doesn't seem important at this part of the story... Maybe leave the gender unknown... and then you can have a dramatic reveal scene (for both Caitlin and the readers) where the mysterious and hooded kidnapper flips back the hood and shows her face.

I think you spent too much time describing this girl's clothes, and, considering how short this chapter is, it makes it seem like there's more thought put into her outfit than there is into the story.

"Look, Barry, as your personally physician, I recommend that you stop worrying about me and worry about yourself for a bit." I really like this line, however, it should be "personal physician" rather than "personally physician."

I hope this didn't come off as "I hate your story" or anything or too harsh. I think you have a lot of great ideas, but sometimes the way you word things can sound a bit awkward and that takes away from the readers' experience. I would just recommend reading things over once or twice to catch any mistakes/misspelled words/or missing words and read sentences aloud to see if they make sense. Good luck and I do hope to see this continued! I'm just as curious as everyone else to see where this is going and what this mysterious girl wants with Caitlin.

I'm sucker for a worried!barry and kidnap stories. Update soooon plz

Please continue!

Make more of this story

Come dude update faster

Interesting Idea for a story. Perhaps for a title you can call it something like Cait-napped or something.

It makes me very curious! I would like to read the next for sure!