This was done very well, friend! :) I really enjoyed getting to read all the scenes between Elijah and Khara. :) And then going back to Mystic Falls and all the drama begins. All the Cassia stuff would be so confusing and then Elena and pretending not to be herself. You've got a really good story here! I know it's on hiatus, but I just wanted to say that you've done really well with this so far! Even if for some reason you never get back to it (not that I think that) but know that I know you've done really well with this. That it's obvious you put your heart into this and that I really enjoyed getting to read whatever it is you have to give us! Thank you for writing this! It was nicely done! :)

I loved reading all the Khara & Elijah scenes! It's obvious Elijah has something going on, but he doesn't want to scare her. I feel so bad for Khara/Elena though. The flow was great! Thanks for writing this! Again-I love reading the flashbacks! They tie into things so well. :)

So, I'm really loving how quickly you introduced Elijah. LOVE all the flashbacks. You are weaving such a wonderful story here! I must confess, that I've only watched the first few seasons of Vampire Diaries, but this has me hooked and I really want to read more. I *might* have a slight appreciation for Elijah, so this makes me really curious to see how you incorporate him this early on. And how you're gonna introduce her back into things (which you might already do in the next couple chapters) I'm just trying to express that I'm excited to keep reading this. Thank you for writing it! :)

Please continue. Love your story.

uh-oh Elijah made a mistake not telling her of cassia

wow what a bitch katherine trying to steal a man from her own sister

this sounds a lot like that 'playing with fire' story just with Elijah saving her instead of katherine

Love it!

so, I know that I normally said that I love every fanfic that I read, but in this case is 100% right, your story is so damn good, I think that you have and incredible talented and creative mind. My desire is see another chapter soo, I hope that happends.
Sinceraly your fan.

Love it

Oooh

plz plz plz update soon.

Really good! Just one question, are Caitlyn and Cassia the same person. I noticed in the flashbacks you used both names for the same person. So is it Caitlyn or Cassia?!

Awwww

I'd like to see how this all plays out seeing as how the beginning has already been changed a lot. But it's really good!