Reviews for A Mother's Love
notvisiulebliss chapter 9 . 1/24
I hate these fanfics they start off with cool concepts but the mc loses and loses and loses and loses and loses an s
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21
Just starting, looks promising
ShannTheMann256 chapter 9 . 1/12
please update, this is a awesome story
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2019
It doesn't make any sense for that omake to be canon to the story, though. Cinder was literally raised by Salem to marry Jaune, and she only sent her out when she judged her good enough for him. Why would she read her the riot act for accomplishing her own mission?
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 9 . 8/1/2019
Eagerly await
Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R chapter 8 . 8/1/2019
I like the story so far. Nothing stands out (I can't think of anything so far that I thought could be improved\took slight issue with).
So yeah, nice jobI can be rather nitpicky at times).
Its a different take on the story.

I am now following this.
I look forward to future chapters!
Dracaris5470 chapter 1 . 7/11/2019
hope it continues
ATNF chapter 1 . 2/24/2019
Love this story! So please, UPDATE ALREADY!
pyoson123 chapter 9 . 12/22/2018
Instead of the omake you could had wrote more of the story
Rainbine208 chapter 2 . 8/28/2018
Commas exist for a reason, learn how to use them.
Malgrath chapter 9 . 8/19/2018
This isn't going to be updated is it?
kevinkocher1 chapter 2 . 7/31/2018
i liked till i didn't
Alvelvnor chapter 1 . 6/17/2018
love it. more please, also can't wait for hollowed arc. good luck with the job man congratulations!
Guest chapter 9 . 4/30/2018
I honestly do hope by chance this will be continued, but you never know with stories that are updated monthly then to stop all of a sudden, because this story has some great potential and I think you were heading in the right direction. But if it's not to be then it's not to be, but I do hope it gets picked up by somebody else to continue this.
Wacko12 chapter 3 . 3/18/2018
wait, please don't tell me Jaune Arc is Salem's son
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