Write a sequel please

Really enjoyed this

Well you did at least do the wedding, sorry pages wouldn't load, but I still feel Sam should have been a bigger part then he was. Even their parting as teammates seemed stiff and cool and until Deja they were best friends.

I really like your story, but you left Sam out of most of it and considering many times it's been said they were brothers and so I have to say I'm a bit disappointed that he wasn't included more. Also what about Sam in the end, could he not be considered for Team leader or even Operations Manager if he wanted it? He's certainly team oriented and has had a lot of experience, yet you left him out of the equation at the end. Are you planning a follow up story with deja and Callen's wedding, you alluded to it and then left the reader with no conclusion to it.

Such a good story. I read it again for the fourth time.

I found your story and I loved reading it.

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz

So we finally made it. That was a wonderful close to a fantastic story. Wou,d love to have heard the speeches by the team but that's what our imaginations are for, right? Well done. I do hope you will be writing more Callen stories in the future... k? Ha.

A nice happy ending for them all!

I’m sad to see this end but that was a wonderful ending

Well done you! A very sweet story and a well written Grisha. Thank you sharing.

Hi! A great ending for a great story... Don't stop writing and good luck

Nice story but its not done till they are happily married. I would have thought someone would have offered Callen Hettys job, he'd be qualified for it and it wouldn't be in harm's way unless he chose to go in the field.

Awwwwww, garrison! So sweet.

It really is nice to see Grisha and Garrison actually interacting with each other on a friendly/familial level. It's not perfect but it's moving forward in a positive direction.