I do like this story but you or someone else needs to proofread before posting. You keep getting character and origins mixed. First Jay is Denobulan, then she’s Orion; the security guard whose name is Kenny, but yet you put his name as James at times. Plus a slight factual error: Romulans and Klingons wouldn’t be on Earth. At this time both in the original and alternate timelines, the Romulans and Klingons Klingon were still hostile to the republic and wouldn’t step foot on Earth. I still love the storyline, you just need to get a better hold on details. I do hope you continue this.

More please! Keep it up!

I'm dying for more please update

Keep going please

Great chapter. A bit short, but nice. Keep calm and write on!

next one please?

next one please

Omg. Wow, i really love this style of writing. a perfect balance of introspection and action. i love it!

good Work waiting for the next.

This is really good! Keep up the good work! :)