The concept was sound, the plot was interesting and the idea is original. Sounds like you just need a bit of help. I urge you to not give up on this fic yet. As for help from some other authors and your fans. See what they think, we're hundreds strong, ONE of us has to be capable of helping you out.

Give me some time to look over the fic and I'll see what I can do.

If you are willing to write new one based on this. I would love to see that

It would be interesting. Having the characters of Percy Jackson in the Narutoverse is rarely done. Plus this fic was amusing.

I definitely enjoyed the story, and I think reusing this idea in some form would be greatly appreciated by all your readers!

I would like to see this new adventure you are thinking about

learn from your mistakes in order to help forge something new

I love this story and I hate to see it end. Please try and make a reboot

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

this was something fun to read and if you want to re-write it go ahead as you can only make it better

I think this story got too ridiculous by the end, so it's good that it's ended. Seriously, Hestia's Characterization made no sense by the end of it.

I love this story and I would love to see you create something newer and greater with this premise!

Nvm your done with the story forget my review

Wow this first chapter is kinda weird an ooc sasuke description and konoha anti pervert alliance? Im gonna be honest the first chapter isn't really pulling me into your story a sasuke bash and a naruto who seems to act like hormones aren't a thing for other males i feel like he's written like this to appeal the girls friendship wise but this is just the first chapter so theres still a chance for this to improve

Great work I really enjoyed it while it lasted great job

Nice chapter