Niiice! This was excellent!

Huh. Good start! I like it!

I like the fact how you integrated both genders of the avatar as twins and the way in which you portrayed them. I can't wait until the scene where Eve and Aidan will have to decide what family to support and how that will affect the plot and the relationship between the twins. I hope that you get to writing the main story soon but unt l then I will be keeping an eye on this fic.

Honestly, I just hope you don't go with Aiden/Azura. Azura is already overdone and hardly offers much.

Oh my goodness! That is heartbreaking! Honestly, I wish I could write this well! The way that you have given each of the twins such a distinct personality, and the desciption of their captivity is truly amazing! Keep on writing and update soon!

DRAT. I ready this and didn't see if the story was completed yet! Nooooo, it's soooo dang good. Can't binge read this! ;0;.. enough of the crying, in all seriousness amazing story so far, excited to see what's next. I enjoy the complex personalitys of the twins and how you portrayed the nhor sibilings, excellent job :)

Wooowwww your portrayal of the characters are awesome! I've always loved the idea of the avatars being twins and I can't wait for your next update! :D

oh my gosh the angst! you play at my heartstrings like a guitar hero. I love it. I'm really interested to read on how you further develop your twins and their dynamic towards each other (and not to mention to the rest of the peeps!) as the story progresses. the hype for this fic be real already!

Listening to my favorite band while writing about my favorite twins? Yes. Hurting Aidan like this? A GLARING NO, BUT I'LL LET IT SLIDE. So begins the journey of the Twilight Twins... Funny, I thought the beginning was a long time ago, but turns out I was wrong. I'm looking forward to (and afraid of) seeing what happens next!

Well done, I'm looking forward to what comes next.

I don't know why, but I for some reason think Aidan's marrying Camilla, while Eve's marrying Xander right.

Great chapter, really loved how Aidan is rebellious from the start and hadn't given up on his inner fire to fight.
Really sad and happy at the same time that he would be the responsible big brother and help Evelyn by protecting her, even if it means throwing away his home to make her happy.
Really love the chapter and looking forward to see what will happen next :)

Seems really interesting so far. Although im curious if Aidan made it back to Hoshido. Regardless, I really like how you made the first meeting between Camilla and Eve. It took a long time for Camilla to coax her out of the bed which makes perfect sense considering what she went through. Keep up the amazing work!

This first chapter was so heartbreaking to read, but to see Camilla bee such a fantastic big sister to Eve/Evelyn was heartwarming and lovely.
Love the first chapter of this new story and congratulations on it being your 50th publication.
Well done on the atmosphere of the story and how tense it was that you could actually cut it with a knife.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Seeing all those Fire Emblem Fates fanfic pop up makes me so happy :D . The intro made me sad seeing kamui, in this case eve, all scared ;w; . I like the idea of twins in fates because it opens so much more potentiential ;3.
I can't wait to see the couples you've established XP. I'm a sucker for fluffy and romance stuff in fanfic XD
Can't wait to see more :)

OOh, this is going to be fun! I love Eve already, can't wait to hear about Aiden!