For the love of pete plz update! I miss this story so much.

I hope you update soon as I’m interested to see where this story goes. However, it feels like a bit of a harsh switch of pace from her being in Mirkwood and then running off to be in Rivendell without revisiting what happened in Mirkwood, or her friendship with Legolas. I’m still very intrigued to see where you take the story.

Hello there, I've just finished read your last updated chapter and I must say that even though I extremely was unsure at the beginning, your story is interesting. The plot isn't one that ends up being predictable. That is something I appreciate a lot in a fanfiction.
I see you've been struggling with your plot and ideas, I suggest maybe to keep a notebook nearby so you can write anything that goes through your mind when it does, as silly as it may be.
I rarely review, if barely ever these days, but i felt compelled to when I read reviews on here. I hope you don't forget that story belongs to you and not the readers, do what you plan and keep the story yours. If we wanted to read our ideas we would write them instead of reading other people's work. Just don't beat yourself up overthinking about the readers' opinions.
By the way, you've improved a lot.
Keep up the good work.

I’ve just started reading this fic this past week. I love it! I’m so glad it oc/Glorfindel and not oc/legolas like it says in the summary. It’s by far my favourite pairing. I love how the two interact with each other and her calling him old man makes me happy because it’s so true. Thank you for not making Heather a Mary Sue. She has real problems and six years in has some difficulty with reading and still hasn’t learned common. I wish Glorfindel and her would learn each other first languages together like she did with legolas. Her learning quenya or common while he learns English.

Also I won’t forgive you if the twins aren’t fine but I’m also kinda hoping the find balin in Moria and maybe save him. Speaking of which did the dwarves escape? Because you totally didn’t mention a dragon etc after she returned. Is Heather Celebrians daughter even though she is in valinor and doesn’t even know about her? I’m actually excited to see her end up there to meet celebrian I think they would hit it off.

Also if I have kindle unlimited and rent your book will you receive a royalty? Will it happen for each time I rent it? I’m totally willing to support you that way if it helps you keep writing ;)

Do the world a favor and please change Legolas relationship status tu single and Glorfindel paired with OC. There is NO WAY anyone would not marry him after all the time they spent together and the purity of the love they share. I cant wait to read their wedding, I ship it, so much.

Amazing story! I can't wait to read more! I really love good romances set in this world, but unfortunately I can't find a whole lot of them. Congratulations on your engagement by the way!
~Peredhel

Such a great story! I’m in wuv with Glorfy, he is such a sweetheart and it’s funny how he gets nervous around Heather sometimes. Can’t wait to see what u have planned for the rest of this fic
Keep up ;)

I have nothing against Legolas (I actually like the book version of him), but in my opinion Heather is better suited with Glorfindel. Plus Heather wouldn't have to leave Imladris or her Elven family if she stayed with Glory!

Team Glorfindel! Please let the LOTR fangirls have Legolas, and Heather can stay with Glorfindel, lol.

I actually prefer Heather with Glorfindel rather than Legolas, so I hope you decide to change the pairing.
Elves only love once in their lifetime, so it wouldn't make much sense for Heather to dump Glorfindel to be with Legolas. Glorfindel would fade and die from the heartbreak.
The only way I see Heather being with Legolas, is if Glorfindel died and even then, it's not the way of the Elves to move on with another after their mate dies.

As I stumbled over this story I found it refreshing the way, Heather wasn't able to understand the elves and how she learned the new language. It was intriguing to learn how she accepted her new life, family and friends and grew accustomed to it. But I have a question: Has Heather ever read the letter Legolas had written to her? Has she forgiven him? Will they be friends again in time? You never mentioned.
Best wishes and stay healthy.

Love the chapter! And I'm rooting for a oc/glorfindel fic always they are just so cute together! The banter between them is great to read I find in a lot of fics there isn't really any talking between couples when boom they are suddenly in love so I love how you developed their relationship! Also one of the previous chapters Heather's reaction to the dwarves locked up was just gold because it actually made sense. If I was in her situation that would have been my reaction so realistic reactions are one things I love!

You cannot believe how surprised and delighted I was to see you'd updated!As always, your chapter did not disappoint and it was just sooo great to witness Heather's character come to life again, I had forgotten how much I liked her. I am also really looking forward to seeing Legolas reintroduced into the narrative, as it will add interesting dimension of tension to the story and I am excited to see how Heather and Legolas will adjust and evolve their relationship. Thank you so so much for updating xx

Hiya, love the story so far, just checking u have Heather as having red hair in previous chapters but in this ine it is black. Please can u keep it red as she seems more lively as a redhead also I set her up in my head as a redhead. Thanks and looking forward to reading the rest of the story. I also liked previously the way she turned it into a game of hiding stalker. Lol

Did she read Legolas's letter?