There's a lot going on but I'll wait for the conclusion :)

The omake is every guys nightmare nice thanks for reminding us hahaha

I very much enjoy this story, but you stopped at the point of the Battle for Beacon. You have set things up extraordinarily well where I, as the reader, can guess some of what may happen in the next chapter, but there is so much going on that I can't know the entire idea. I hope that you come back to this story, but I understand if you don't considering the difficulty of coming back something that you have not worked on for a year.

Awesome story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

So your MC is a hero... I mean, four year old convinced that he can fight against monsters, believing in 'friendship is magic'.

I give up man what a lame story.. ffs.. gross yuck.. blerghhh

stop reincarnating imbeciles

you don't need a wyvern.. u have Salem.. already...and brute force was all that was necessary Salem would have won long ago for ffs...but don't mind me just started reading... comments otw...

many times I wish the I had found stories like this sooner, (when they were still being published) so that I could also voice my own input because the author is asking. But I also enjoy not knowing what is going to be written, so I am intrigued. Great story Gravenimage

So, I understand that I am extremely late on this review, but I hope that maybe this will be used for future reference.
1. This was one part that just kinda rubbed me the wrong way... “Assault Rifle” with a grenade launcher and is a sword... are you trying to make an OP harem protagonist character here?
2. Again with the “Assault Rifle” the Calibers that could fall in there are vast, from 5.56mm, 7.62mm, 7.92mm, 9mm, 6.5mm. So what kind of gun does he have? An M4 variant, M16 Variant, one of the many AKs, maybe even an STG-44, or even an MA5 variant... because RWBY and RvB.
Ok enough with the weapon... even though I could keep going on about it.
3. Why doesn’t Summer trust Jaune with meeting with Ozpin to explain what is happening and going to happen? He already knows about the Fall Maiden and he is from the future so if anything Ozpin would want to make Jaune one of his new secrets.
4. 13 years is a long time to try and remember the small details of the future. I am surprised that you didn’t have him attempt to write it down or do something to remember it by.

Quick question I love this story but, why doesn't juane just call his healing summon again to heal Weiss? Is he completely out of Aura? Or is he only able to take a summon out once per time period? Is he just in shock? How does this work?

So,I see it's been a couple of months since you've updated this, but I figured I'd leave a review regardless.
I typically don't like leaving reviews in regards to the content of a story, and the same holds true here. What I will focus on is the technical aspects of it, i.e. punctuation, spelling, usage and syntax.
In all honesty, reading the story at the beginning was difficult, as there were several occasions per chapter where the grammar or word usage was either incorrect, or awkward, and it tended to detract from the way the story flowed. I can't provide specific examples right now, unfortunately, but it might be something to look into in the future, if you do continue with the story.
As for punctuation and syntax, on a number of occasions, it seemed like there were areas in the sentences and paragraphs where you had made some corrections in the drafts, whether it be sentence placement or even just in words used, but no changes to the rest, and so the sentence would sound forced, or, again, awkward.
That being said, I in no way want you to think that I do not enjoy this fic, or that I am in any way trying to say you are a bad author, rather instead trying to provide some helpful advice. I do enjoy this story, and, as the chapters progressed, there was a noticeable improvement to all of the things I mentioned above.
I would recommend, provided you intend to continue this story, to look into possibly getting a beta reader. I know in my own works (despite not having written anything in years) that looking at a draft with the same eyes that wrote it, it is difficult sometimes to notice the mistakes that are there.
I hope my review is helpful, and that you continue with this story. Also, I really do enjoy your Community, and am now following it.

Average African elephant weighs 12000 lbs...

now i remember why I dropped this fanfic... it was the lame semblance mmm...yea well its a shame... i really liked the pairing s

really he hits a child?