Kind of sad this hasn’t updated in four years. It was getting really interesting. Was Naruko an accidental alt personality that got to develop his close quarters combate while Naruto got long range?

This was even more messed up! Good job.

That was all kinda of messed up.

Great story looking forward too more chapters

Just when I thought Hinata would go Dom route, you write Hiashi POV. Great

Please update again

pity that it's discontinued, it's one of the best and most captivating fanfictions I've ever read

Please continue this story i really love it

damn, the story you made is damn good and to be honest this chapter is brilliant, don't get me wrong all of the others chapters were quite good but this... is freaking amazing and the ending pure gold i'm sure that if this was in an animated serie it would be freaking terrorific, you sir did a damn good job on this chapter

i want to say it's a shame that this didn't have an update in almost 3 years i really hope you don't abandon this and are only taking a time off because this first chapter was quite good, it feels very different of most naruto fanfictions i have read and it's quite fun to read

I just wanted to say there's a third language katakana along whith the other two all of which are used in a sentence at once

Good story.
Good take on a new tangent.
Thank you for writing.
Motherofthehorde

Thank you!

I enjoyed everything except the Naruko demon arc.

Problem: separating yin and yang, while not easy, is not anything approaching detrimental in the Narutoverse. The non elemental clan tech is also use mixtures of yin and yang chakra separated from each other or not. And the first technique of yin-yang we are introduced to (creation of all things) specifically requires one to separate them from each other, then use those separated forms to reshape reality (use yin to imagine it, then yang to give it that form). Will you ignore this or be taking it into account later?

Tbh, I would just have him highly prefer his spiritual or youkai taught techniques to any chakra based technique, rather than make him "have trouble" or "be unable to use" them since 1) he would be most comfortable with them, 2) they were taught to him by what he feels is essentially his best friends or family, and 3) chakra, while composed of two parts, also starts as those two parts. There are various places where the Naruto characters imply that they have to "create/gather/make" chakra from something (ie, the two parts). The first explanation we get heavily implies excess (ie, more than what is needed to live in Naruto) chakra is made whenever it's used, not that it just sits there in a giant energy pool inside their navel. And chakra exhaustion is implied to happen when you make so much chakra that you've exhausted your physical energy and are tapping into the passive, unconsciously created chakra that lines their organs.