isn't Pon Far the Vulcan mating ritual?

enjoying the story

and "randave" is still not "rendezvous".

If you don't mind the criticism, I think you need to run the story through a spellcheck.
for example: "rendezvous", not "rondevu".

I enjoyed the changes you made to Workforce and the references back to Blood Fever. The talk about the baby was cute, too. Thanks for writing!