| Reviews for The last spartan |
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   dheathking4821 chapter 23 . 9/29 Will this continue ? Brosky |
| TalionN7 chapter 1 . 3/10 Dragonlord0. homie, my main man please update this story. |
| quangnguyentran720 chapter 23 . 3/3 Please let Sean have power to duplicate himself |
| Razor chapter 23 . 3/2 how much longer until next chapter? |
| FriggleBerry chapter 1 . 10/30/2019 This story is kinda confusing on how fast it moves, we have no scale of time passes or anything, he just says I need power after they left but how long was that how powerful is he there are a shitload of unknowns that make it a little annoying to read |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2019 Hey motherfucker when are you going to update the last spartan, the spartan mutant and the United universe legion fanfiction already so hurry the fuck up |
| Smaug666 chapter 2 . 9/23/2019 Manhunter: (In a monotone voice) NO MAN ESCAPES THE MANHUNTERS. |
| wolfpackrwby88 chapter 2 . 8/16/2019 You do know that in some adaptions Diana is Zeus's daughter, right? (Or are you TRYING to get an incest thing going?) |
| Buddhalishous chapter 1 . 3/17/2019 The Romans aka ,Spartans, regarded Jupiter as the equivalent of the Greek Zeus so it Should be son Jupiter or change the backstory a bit because it would have been seen as an insult for a ROMAN QUEEN to give birth to a Greek baby. |
| greylonwolf65 chapter 23 . 3/4/2019 I know you haven't added to this story for awhile, but, I think it would be nice to see what happens next. I love the ideas you have about Sean being the last Spartan was brilliant and having the girls having the babies is excellent especially the villains and heroes together. I would throw in Lois Lane that way when the child grows up it could have her curiosity and chaos for danger so to speak. |
| AadenHelan chapter 23 . 2/19/2019 Are you dropping this story? I hope you pick it up soon |
| micah28g chapter 2 . 2/6/2019 How are you able to write these lemons without getting in trouble on . |
| NeroSyrix chapter 3 . 1/23/2019 i only read three chapters and i already have lost all interest in this Story because everything is rushed and too fast progressing and too much of a macho story |
| Ryan L. Spradling chapter 24 . 9/17/2018 So do we have to wait years? |
| Zer0the0mega108 chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 Okay so after reading this story I only got two things to say: 1. Please do not add so much elements from other series other then DC, GoW, and maybe Marvel. I'm not saying it will be bad I'm just saying it is easier to focus on. 2. Please do the Green Lantern Animated series and add Aya, Ghia'ta, Iolande, and Aga'po to the harem. Other then that I will wait for this story to be reupdated. |
