| Reviews for The Wedding |
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just a guy chapter 1 . 6/5 This was so fucking good that I almost forgot to review it. Omg, YLIA will never be the same to me now that I've read this. Thank you for giving Kousei and Kaori the ending that they deserved. Definitely the best YLIA fic I've ever read. |
ItsKKG chapter 1 . 5/7 I almost started crying while reading this. I still wished that Kaori was still alive. ToT |
FullMetalPianist chapter 1 . 1/12 *overly joyful clapping while sobbing* That was absolutely beautiful! You did such an awesome job keeping everyone in character! And... *sniff* using Kaori's letter for her vows? That was super creative, and... also super sweet, and... GAHHH! *Sobs all over again* Thank you so much for writing this, and sharing your talent with us! You have definitely reached me, you wonderful soul! XD Thank you again! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2019 MOOOORRREEEE! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2018 Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. |
OtakuUta chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 That was so good! I loved it! |
romanadiana.castillo chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 I love this so much! |
Primrose Angel chapter 1 . 1/15/2017 I was bored at work today. We had no customers, and I desperately needed a way to keep myself occupied, so I started reading this - just the next fic in my very long list of To-Be-Read You Lie In April fanfiction. That was a mistake. From the very first section, the flashback in italics, I was absolutely hooked by how pure, sweet and heartwarming this was. It took every ounce of self-control I possessed to put down my phone and this story and get back to work. Often, I find long one-shots like this tedious (between 10k and 25k), because more frequently than not such fics have a tendency to drag on, and the same amount of meaning can be conveyed through half the word count. "The Wedding" is definitely an exception - I found it engaging and moving at a good pace - it felt much shorter than 11k words. In terms of constructive criticism - be more careful proofreading, as I found a few spelling/grammar errors as well as some tense fluctuations. Otherwise, this fic warmed my heart. It was creative (I have to say, Kaori using her letter as her wedding vow really got to me. That was something I did not expect, and I may have shed a tear. Or two. Ingenious.), well-paced, and beautifully written. Will definitely reread. As always, thank you for sharing (and sorry about this long, long review!) |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2016 Honestly one of the best fics on this website but please update and say WHEN THE FUCK DID THIS TAKE PLACE! (Good day lol) -A curious Guest A |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2016 Will you still make Your Lie In April fanfictions? I hope you do, cause I really enjoy your stories! Specially this one~ |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2016 I LOVE THIS WHY CAN'T ALL THINGS END LIKE THIS IF POSSIBLE MAKE ANOTHER FANFICTION SEQUEL TO THIS KAORI TELLING KOUSEI SHE'S PREGNANT, AND DO IT UNTIL THE CHILD WILL BE OLD ENOUGH TO LEARN VIOLIN/PIANO PLEASE |
Pikapalsforever12 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016 Encore! Encore! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2016 I love it! |
PandaDawgBE chapter 1 . 7/7/2016 YOU DON'T UnDeRsTaND THIS FANFIC KILLED THE LEVEL OF FEELS I HAD TODAY OMFG. THIS WAS SO INCREDIBLY WELL WRITTEN AND I LOVE ALL THE DETAILS AND THOSE VOWS MAN OMG THOSE VOWS DESTROYED ME BUT YOU KNOW WHAT? THE WEDDING KISS COMPLETELY RAVISHED ME AND THREW ME INTO A HOLE FULL OF FEELS BECAUSE OHMYGOD I COULDN'T HANDLE IT. ITS 3 AM I WAS SUPPOSED TO BE ASLEEP BY NOW BUT haHAaaAHhAHAHA WHO NEEDS SLEEP WHEN YOU CANT BREATHE 100/5 LOVED IT. I WISH I CAN WRITE LIKE THIS BUT I HAVE A FEW YEARS UNTIL I CAN IMPROVE D; ENJOYED THIS TO THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 OH GOODNESS THIS WAS ADORABLE ;;0;; I cried so hard this was the sweetest thing ever oh gosh. I love how he was so eager to see her he tried to walk up to her. That twit ;J Love this, and love love love you're writing style. Thanks so much for this. ;; |