U r definitely an incredible writer.
But please.. Make one more chapter of it, about Izaya make his comeback phisically and a happy ending with his shizu-chan. It left me uneasy to think wether he could come back or trap in that game for good?
Hhuweeeeeeee. #sobbing
Please, shirohime-chan~~~

You're German? You write better than most native english speakers I know!

This story... is one of the bests I have seen yet. Will there be a sequel to show if Izaya does get back in the ‘real world’ or a one shot about it?

Wait... This was so... So painful and awesome and I love it! But, I need one chapter more! I must see to Izaya back (physically) please... Aww I dies

Why I didn't met this story before?

Maybe... If I was to complain about some, that would be that it was so quick. Barely I was starting to thrill when suddenly ends.

If you excuses me, I'll go to read more from yours works n_n]/

Oi! No! It's no fair... How suppose I celebrate that Vorona and Mauri are alive if you kill to Izaya like this ( ;つД) Q_Q

Noo! Vorona! T—T I loved her...
What is worse, Mairu! Izaya, the Orihara bros not deserved this /_,

On other hand, I knew it! I knew that that girl not could be as evil as her boss, although I espected some more dramatical.

Btw, I thought that the "misterious helpers" were Mikado, Aoba or Tsukumoya even. u]U

Somehow, I should have expected this, it was obvious if you think it, yet so...
That explain why Shinra wasn't kidnaped too.

(Although the Izaya that Akane knows is Nakura and she not hate him, I think)

Oh! (This has nothing to do, but well) I just realize that Izaya should unable walk after their fight (from the rafter Shizuo used to make a homerun, I mean)
But... Already is late for to change that, I guess n_n]U
Anyways! I like the course this is taking.

Sorry for my weird english x)

Like gamer that I am, this sounds like will like me... Tad bad that they can't craft any weapons or food, they aren't? If only they can found some fairy pink~ XD

For some reason I imagine to the oldman as Sozoro from Izaya's novel... Whatever, this story is liking me, by now at least heehe... sorry for my weird english, it isn't my mother language.

This was dark/ beautiful engulfing my very soul.
By the end my heart was in Gif: media/d2lcHJTG5T
You really did have me crying in at the end tho.
god bless you.

Woah i'm so hooked. I would love to play such a game (without the real life dying xD)

It's interesting so far and i get little creeped out. Which is a good thing XD

Absolutely loved this!

I just KNEW that Izaya was going to be implemented in the game somehow! 3
The ending was so adorable! Poor lil scared Izaya, all alone ):
This was too cute! Great work!