HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHHA... THIS WAS PRECIOUS HOLY SHIZZLES. I can't stop laughing at the boy's cruelty. Kudos to the boys tho. It's really nice to see the relationship with the brothers. Nice one. XD

I've got the giggles

I'm not kidding I was laughing, yet I was feeling really bad for Butch. He getting hurt non stop. Well, I hope that's it's now Buttercup who'll get those two back because of the ruined Date they had planned.

Love each story of yours! Keep it going.

Okay...I'm just gonna laugh

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, GO BRICK AND BOOMER

YA DA BESTTT

Lol I wonder if bubbles laughed too.

Haha haha hahaha I was waiting for this . Geez you're freaking amazing.
Do you even realize how funny you are.
Loads of love
~

AHHH, I love your writing and this was great. (Mad as fuck at Brick and Boomer tho :( kind of want BC to whoop their asses for bae) :D Great job!

For someone who doesn't participate in pranjs this is a goldmine. It was soooooo hilarious. Loved it!

LOL, I loved both your stories. super well written.

THE ESCALADE MADE AN APPEARANCE AND I LOVED IT! Also "lobster dad" had me cackling. I really enjoyed this sequel fic and thought it was a nice addition. It was really funny and some really good moments in it. Keep up the good work though with your other writings!

Damn! I feel bad for Butch. Seriously, Brick and Boomer are just monsters.

Wow. I've read through it. And it was indeed a great read!

One small thing I might have liked included was a subtle implication of things getting patched between the other couples, but I know this was hardly about that.

Maybe some other story months/years from now, one that's not about revenge mainly, could have that, along with other things, of course, possibly as a way to wrap things nice and neat. But, until then...meh.

Besides, other than that...

(laughing maniacally tapering off into laughing good-naturedly,)
BWAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! A-HAHAHAHAHA! HAHA haha hahahehe hehe eh heheheheheeh heheh heh heh ahem (clears throat)

Anyway...

It's beautiful Goldie, it's just like you said it would be, only better And when his eyes go wide, the purgatory they sent him to must seem like hell after what they've done to him.

Seriously, all scripted goofiness, and badly done parodies of a quote by Marv from "Sin City"(my alterations to which, did not include, what I thought would work as a nickname for you, lol) aside, this was just what the more-evil-than-good doctor ordered!

They really made the punishment fit the crime, framing Butchie-boy just as he framed them.
Genius! Inspired! Brilliant!
Especially, because in a way, that could be Him and Mojo's comeuppance for their part, unwilling, and unknowing, as I know, and don't care it was in the previous hijinx.

Not to mention, the ending really shed some new light on the importance of listening to your girlfriend's warnings about payback-driven brothers. If she says "they're gonna get you back for that big time," like Buttercup did in the earlier story, at the very least, keep the thought in mind, rather than just say, "let them," like Butch did!

On that particular note, an "I told you so" from BC would've been perfect for the moment.

In summary, this was basically a pure vengeance fic, and it was basically pure gold. As my laughing script should have indicated, it had plenty of plotting and comedy in combination, and for someone who usually partake in doing pranks, you should have some pride in it.

By the way, happy April Fool's day to you too!

And yes, it is ironic to have this out on today.

Ironically FITTING!

Lol

OM MY GOSH IM LAUGHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW! MAKE ANITHER ONE! PLEASE!

My goodness. That... Was heck of a prank: good revenge but glitter oh god... That just seems cruel and unusual poor Butch and God knows Buttercup is likely going to end up covered in it as well XD

Whoo boy: that was heck of a ride. Well done again!