I love that you added more a bit more to the Admiral's backstory at Tau Ceti.

I really like the way you write. Hope you give us many more stories! Thank you!

The first half of this story made me cry. I always felt terrible for the Admiral. Just how much suffering can one person endure before breaking? She finally went back in time to change history. I just wish that Voyager had ended with the command team admitting their feelings for each other. Lovely story.

This is such a better ending for everyone, but how sad for all the agonies the older Janeway had to experience.