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Looking forward to the next chapter

I can sense a part of kirito's harem fell into erza's newly built-probably harem- place. The ecchi is strong with this one

Finally im ready to pre read for you again and btw i found some mistakes in sentences that made the sensless but i still cant copy out of stories and switching chapters while writing this would make it even harder so id suggest u send me the chapters 1-3 so if i find something you can change it afterwards and the continue with the rest of the story at your liking .

Really well written. You definitely did your research on some of the backstory. One thing I have to say is that you could check your grammar a bit more. Maybe get an editor. Other than that, it's well done.

Thanks for clearing that up. I’ll be looking forward to the time you’ll answer the rest of the questions in story.

Interesting premise. The messenger could be one way to insert a character from the outside into Aincrad. But how would he even give them their letters? It’s not like he takes anything with him when he goes to Aincrad. And if they really were able to hack the letters in why could they not send them to the people directly? In other words, he would had to deliver them verbally. And considering how many letters he had to remember, this would either be completely unlikely – or the exact reason why they decided on making a teenager the messenger instead of a person on their death bed.
This would also help with the fact that the “messenger” part of your story comes a bit short. If he had to deliver the letters verbally, they would not be some uninteresting plot device, but an actual part of the story, as we would see at last some reactions to the letters and character development which is what I would like to see in a story with that premise.
Also, for someone jumping into a death game, he sure is rude when someone asks him if he has a death wish. I mean, he could just explain the situation instead of just saying “name”.
On the other hand, I like how Ezra complains about skills/stats missing in this game.

hehe, money lost to the rat.

oh yeah, im readin this

Awesome please update soon!

Nice way of making it work john

Interesting summary grabbed my interest. I always thought of SAO as a closed circle, but I like this premise. Seems like he can't jump in and out, so it looks like his role as a mailman is a oneshot role.
Not sure what I think of Ezra yet, seeing as how he's someone that took the noble role of messenger, then get immediately snippy with the first person we see him interact with.
Still, it was well written enough, with a premise that isn't something I see every day.
I certainly am curious enough to see where this is going.