Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Legit just started it and I have to comment not the first 2 paragraphs hahah. I get it like I started drinking at 13 and with the “it’s getting good” that’s how it all begins it’s the time to start cause all the parties get crazy and it’s great and yeah who am I to refuse but looking back I feel bad for starting at that age. I’m 18 and I get so drunk all the time from 13 till now and I feel shit but I can’t even help it anymore :/ so a bit of advice don’t start so young. Maybe try it cause sure you have to know at some point but don’t start actually going hard at it then lol. Anyway imma keep reading (I legit just came home from a party and I’m still kinda drunk sooooo lmaoo)

Oh, geez. There's actually a Trench Coat God, that's hilarious... Hmm... "[redacted privacy]-sama"? A single-syllable name? Could it be the real Zack? I mean, this is mere speculation but it made me think Zack is Trench Coat guy, but he gave the name to the Kakashi lookalike? It's not a Japanese name after all... There's a bit more on that theory I have but again, my imagination could just be running wild. You haven't even confirmed this story is linked to the other one, after all... At least, not yet. It could totally be a coincidence that Amy was reborn into a baby named Naoki, whom in another story by the same author, sings songs from our world and seems to know more than the average three year old... Right? Either way, I'm now keeping an eye on both of your stories~

So... Naoki, huh? ... HA.

His design is to cross dimensions? Err.. that just made me think Silver is Zack. Just a thought, though.

I, too, am British, and have coincidentally had 2 cups of tea while reading this story since i found it not long ago haha.

Lol 2 funny liked the last and first chapter best.

Cool read!

Nice to see a girl playing a role which is normally male dominated in the genre, I think some more character development early would have benefited the story a lot so we are more aware of the characters and know more about what the main characters look like, what they are thinking and how they are.
Also really liked the manga narrative in a novel "normally written" sense, though it would have been nice to have translations next to the Japanese text.

I look forward to reading more! :)

Ahahahaha. Really? What happened to her hair? Didn't expect that...

Okay , you got me interested , lets see where this goes !

interesting. like the story so far. cool concept. haven't seen it before. kinda confused with all the pure Japanese parts but I get that it's supposed to make the story flow better. looking forward to the next chapter

If you're going to use Japanese, you should keep in mind that Kakashi doesn't use desu very much, as a stand alone or its contractions. That's something for more polite characters, whereas Kakashi was meant to come off as having a rude manner of speech in Japanese.

Amusing.

Sooooo, you're breaking dimensional barriers with the consumption of alcohol? Good luck...

Writing is good, didn't pick up on any mistakes but I could've missed them, and I can't exactly judge the accuracy of the Japanese parts but I'll take your word for it.

Is cosplayer Kakashi's son? Young Kakashi maybe? How does that tie in? How will you go from here? Will this remain in our universe or the narutoverse?

Well that's about it. Overall the first chapter was... somewhat interesting. It was novel in a good way, despite the general confusion it elicited. I guess I'd have to read more to know whether or not this story is actually worth reading, which is confusing in of itself but what can you do.

O.O?!