I'm Canadian and I get offended if I stranger says only the word Chill by itself. If it's a friend and I'm comfortable then it's okay. I don't know if that helps you.
The story is great minus a few spelling mistakes but that improves with practice. It is such an original story. But I don't think I want to see usagi forgiving mamo because he only loved her after he got hurt like he hurt her. Not fair for poor usako. Keep up the great work

Are you rushing the story

Im glad mamoru eant to man up now. But dont take him back usa he might do it again. Seiya been there for you stay wirh him

I'm Canadian too. I'd only be mad if a stranger said "chill" to me as a word by itself. If a friend says it then it's all good.
Nice story! I don't think she should forgive him because he only realized he loved her after rei hurt him. But they are so sweet together and Mamoru and Ussgi have got have a happy ending! Keep up the great work!

Late is an understatement...I reread the story and it's good...looking forward to the confrontation of Rei...

sorry your upset.

i from new zealand and its not a bad word like you mentioned it means to you relax same goes for us

I can tell English is not your primary language not trying to offend the story is interesting, but you can tell with how you phrase some things. anyways I see you mentioned how some people might get offended or something chill is slang for relax but it depends on how you phrase it if you put all caps it can be taken as a harsh reply. but it's usually told to someone if they are getting a little out of hand you tell them yo chill out or chill dude it shouldn't be taken as offensive but the person could be taking it as if you assume she/he is upset and will react poorly to the word chill but to react to take offense from someone saying chill to them is stupid on their part and shows they are immature and have no idea it's just a slang for relaxing.

glad they meet upagain. but i hope she dosn't forgive him to quickly but still let him be a dad

Why should a person be told that it offending that they tell someone else to calm down? It should depend in what context it is written in that it should appear offensive or not right? So with the way it sounds, so you should just either tell then that it wasn't meant in such a way or ignore them if they don't listen, but you writing really well, I hope you update soon.

While chill is a common term to mean relax amoung friends, if you are not familar with someone then it could be taken in a condescending manner. It entirely depends on the situation, tone, and sub-context of the conversation. If that was the only word in the message and I didnt know you. Eyind the story then yes I can see how it ruffled some feathers.

I am Canadian and "chill" means relax, however, depending on the tone and context, i can see it someone getting offended by it.

I love Mama and Usa, but for these circumstances Mamo-chan should suffer a little more cause of what he did. :P

some of the wording doesn't make the sentences make sense. So usagi has been gone for 5 years. now that mamoru knows he has a son is he going to tell usagi what happened between rei and him with his son there?

Mamoru's a huge jerk in this story. If Rei wasn't barren then he would have never thought about Usagi again... even in this chapter he thinks about how he wishes that Rei's pregnancy was not a lie. So basically, he was upset that Rei lied but he probably would have forgiven her if she wasn't barren... so why would Usagi want him now? Yes, they share a child but doesn't she deserve someone who loves her the most? Someone that wouldn't only be with her because the woman he really loves can't have children? Yes, Mamoru smiles when he remembers Usagi, but I don't think he'll ever love her like he does Rei..
Don't get me wrong, I'm always 10000% Mamoru/Usagi romance ALLLLLL THE WAY, but in this story, he makes me mad & I'm disgusted with him! Other than that, I love Usa's character and Maru is adorable!