good work. i hoped to read more chapter.

Good Chapter!

pretty stupid to use kubikiribocho when you need chakra to use it, especially when you have plenty of katanas lying around. fyi a katana cuts through ppl like its nothing

the way you discribe his problems with chakra could only be possible if he destroyed his eight gates, and destroyed in a way like closed for good and not broken open for good as that would kill you.
basicly it is the opposite of rock lee's problem.
it might make somewhat sense that because his body is used to it he need chakra to stay alive, and him being unable to produce it thus need to pull it from elsewhere.

still it is a rather vage problem, but i do agree he needs it cause naruto with full power is no challenge for a few zombies

real original, naruto inserted into a light novel without any explanation of how and why, maybe it'll come later but it does give the writer ample time to be a mysterious and have them speculate on who naruto is why he is like that and ofc for us if he has chakra.

its just so cheap to create sensation with your writing style instead of having an intriguing plot. you might aswell state, yeah i know i have really nothing to say but i can tell it in such a way you'll like it

I couldn't help but noticed you found the only black teenager in Japan and made them a rapist. I gotta ask, why go out of your way to dig into a stereotype? Based on the show you're basing the story around you weren't hurting for local antagonist, why import bad guy?

great chapter

You can die for all I care for nerfing. Chakra is an energy that replenish itself, same for Kurama, all energy and life force just replenish it. You fucked up teh story for a weak excuse like, he is too strong for ZOmbies.

I read Naruto for being strong, he deserves it after all the shit and now you give me this. Fuck off, get bitten and die to come back as a zombie

Whew! I hope your break on this story is over soon! I like how you have set it up. Naruto's power nerf fits and is understandable, the stakes getting higher with the undead monster revealed in this chapter, the angst and issues of growing up and being a slave to hormones and pheromones! All in all a gun read and believable premise. I really would like to see where you take it from here! Thank you for the story!

when should we expect the next chapter since its been about 2 years

kota

Dude your description of the creature gave me chills, nice work!

I hope you get around to updating this story, also I have a theory and if you wanna pm me so I can find if I was, it’s not another dimension naruto went forward in time didn’t he? That’s a highly logical explanation

Que porcaria, você é um idiota por colocar chakra em um mundo onde não existe esse tipo de energia e/ou semelhantes, a história ficou sem sentido nenhum, você é um otários, você acabou com a história que estava boa no primeiro capítulo... Lixo, você é um lixo e estou torcendo que sua mãe seja estuprada.

Really hope you get around to updating this story it's really great I like the semi serious not op Naruto (though I like those too) just seems more real (as much as a dimension flung shinobi that can do godlike feats can be that is haha) not able to wipe out the entire zombie horde in one go with a single jutsu and ending the story before it begins type that you can find in some other stories (though those can be really well done as well if done correctly at least)