Reviews for On The Wings Of Freedom |
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Bluzerker chapter 1 . 10/5/2017 Ok look this seems like a great idea but you need to clarify the readers that this is an AU and possibly explain why the UNSC has Garde units as well the gauna. Did the gauna replace the flood? It just leaves the readers confused. |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/13/2017 Very well done though you could make the chapters a bit more longer to help with world building. |
Raptor265 chapter 4 . 6/23/2017 This has been an amazing story so far, please continue this. It is a shame to think that this great story has been forgotten/not worked on. |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/31/2017 More! Please update! |
Spiderwl chapter 4 . 11/19/2016 This is the best fic i've read so far! |
Spiderwl chapter 4 . 11/15/2016 It's quite good, please update ! |
john chapter 4 . 9/7/2016 Keep updating this is great. Will their be pairing? |
0oAsho0 chapter 4 . 7/30/2016 WAIT NO DONT LEAVE ME LIKE THIS! |
andyzhao30 chapter 4 . 6/23/2016 Is this fanfic dead? |
Nipplegunz chapter 4 . 5/28/2016 Cant wait for an update :D |
xXEye0fTheSt0rmXx chapter 4 . 4/5/2016 (I know this is a longshot, but) If anyone would like to be a proofreader for this fanfic, I would greatly appreciate it and would give credit. I'm new to fanfiction and don't know if that is acceptable or not, but I'm looking to learn, and I need your guys' help. Thanks. |
GXY-2013 chapter 4 . 4/4/2016 Keep up. |
The rakiat chapter 2 . 3/30/2016 I see the potential in this story, keep it up dog! |
jjcoop95 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016 Looks interesting. |