| Reviews for Federation the 13th |
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  Rennsteig chapter 2 . 3/2 I wish people would realise that armour, however thick it might be, is pointless when it comes to nuclear weapons. A 20 megaton device vaporizes about 1200m of everythig, that's well over half of the battlestar gone in a fraction of a second. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2019 I wonder how the Battlestars would've fared against the xindi? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2019 A bright future with Dark shadows is born |
 waterburyt chapter 3 . 3/9/2019 A great story so far, but really irritated at the dialogue exchange; there's no clarification as to WHO is speaking at times, and the emotion behind the speeches. It sounds like you were trying to rush things, but have given us no clue as to who was speaking in those scenes. Really wish you could comb over this and give us clarification as to who was speaking and how they were emoting, because I was confused at the end as to who was speaking. |
| awriterareader chapter 6 . 11/2/2018 a very interesting a/u story! i wonder how much different this a/u ncc1701 enterprise would be compared to the originalreboot... especially if starfleet was more militaristic. ... but this story was very interesting! loved it... |
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 6 . 10/25/2018 Love |
| orionastro chapter 6 . 10/5/2018 very good new chapter, and great epilogue for the story |
| syed chapter 5 . 10/5/2018 They actual did some books about those automated stations. That was the least of the tech could do, it apparently allowing a bunch of sentient races physically limited to be space faring. It could also produce its own kind of warships. The tech was shut down by a massive hack attack, but it seems to me that the bio neural gel packs used in modern Star Trek would be able to replace the need of sentients hooked into the systems. |
| pushtrak1 chapter 6 . 10/5/2018 I haven't started reading this yet, but I see you've put in the a/n that it is complete. You ought to mark the story as complete. As it stands, it's showing as a WIP, and there are readers who filter stories by complete. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 a battlestar wouldn't stand a chance against even the NX Class i mean that thing survived photon torpedoes from klingon ships |
| Axcel chapter 2 . 2/9/2018 How dare Earth hog human technology instead of sharing it with people who refuse to help Earth’s FTL technology and so have no right to human FTL tech! Note the sarcasm. |
| Axcel chapter 1 . 2/9/2018 Even anti-matter weapons have difficulty significantly damaging the Enterprise. The Colonial’s guns and nukes wouldn’t be enough. Well, unless the Enterprise didn’t shoot back. Quantity has a quality all its own. |
| WBH21C chapter 5 . 1/14/2018 So very well done! |
| Redwing1co chapter 5 . 1/7/2018 Great story hope toread more |
| Major Simi chapter 5 . 1/3/2018 Wow great chapter |
