The only problem with this story is that there was no Amourshipping. I don't know if its hidden in there or what but, I just didn't see any. Other than that I loved it. I like how you put Serena's determination at the end. It really spikes up the story.

It fills her with DETERMINATION Lol Undertale reference

ooh sound very sweet and spicy dude and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you, amourshipper and proud, remember that dude and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

Great Story, Good Moments from a idea from you. Keep it up. Don't give up till it's over.