| Reviews for The Two Brothers |
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pix25 chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 Hahaha |
Angel the Wizard chapter 1 . 9/10/2019 I read this a few months ago but never left a review. All I should say is that you maybe should have written Ginny having a reaction to what Harry says to her about Lily, relations to the pranksters and 'Potter Forever' graffiti. Such a missed opportunity lol |
Janie-ohio chapter 1 . 4/3/2018 hehehe, love the ending. |
nayin17 chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 Okay |
wrappedinharry chapter 1 . 4/29/2016 Another brilliant 'Harry is a wonderful dad story you excell at them. Lesley~ |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2016 Aww this is great just said that it ended. Will you have a story for the summer where Harry and the others tell the kids everything? |
ArturiusRex8 chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 In your previous story I believe you had James as a Beater on the Quidditch team, but now you have him as a Seeker. Is this like the situation with Ginny, where they need a 'substitute' player because the other one can't play, or something else? -ArturiusRex8 |
LoneTraveler chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 Just :-) |
Addie9 chapter 1 . 3/31/2016 Squeeeee this is so amazing! I like the way you characterise the Potter boys and that Rose made an appearance in this story! You characterise the next generation characters so perfectly the way I have always imagined them to be, love that Neville plays the supportive, cool Uncle/Professor/family friend who takes care and observe the Potter kids so closely while they are in Hogwarts! You characterise Albus very well! Can't wait to see more of him! Next prompt suggestion: please make a standalone chapter on Albus' Quidditch accident and the time the whole family stayed vigil on his bedside. Would love to see Hinny's reactions and thoughts as parents when their child is hurt. Keep making these stories! |
scrappy8 chapter 1 . 3/26/2016 great job |
carolyn jinn chapter 1 . 3/28/2016 Great story. Just wondering, where do the Potters live, if not in Godric's Hollow? Would love to read about Harry taking Lily to the Potter's house. But more, hearing about the summer with Rose, Teddy, James and Al. :) |
kiwifan13 chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 Awesome story :) I do love these family moments. |
holimontski chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 Harry may be whipped but he knows when to go home right away amd when not to...as for mcg telling about lily...well like mother like daughter...oh welll...kutgw |
HG4EVER69 chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 O I laugh so hard. Enjoyed the story. |
wonzie chapter 1 . 3/27/2016 Great Story! Happy easter! I love The Potter family affairs |