Reviews for Lone Traveler: Initiative
kimjo2 chapter 8 . 9/3
More great stuff! Thanks so much
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 8 . 10/2/2019
Enjoyed it.
iamjmph01 chapter 6 . 9/11/2019
Ok, this was fun, and i'll read whats left. My only complaint, is that Harry is a tad bit self-righteous in this chapter. He heard Buffy's side of the story, and as far as he was concerned he was an expert on the situation? Well, he was mostly right about what he said to her in the bunker, but when he was in Sunnydale and lectured the Scoobies? I will admit he was right for the majority of it. Willow and Buffy looked down on Faith from the beginning, as far as my recollections go.
Xander, being a hormonal teenage male stereotype, who it is assumed had at least the abuse in common(maybe only verbal in his case i don't remember), didn't. I could be remembering wrong but when they interacted it was mostly similar to his interaction with the others. She took him to bed, not the other way around. And when things got bad he at least tried to help her. Perhaps because of the sex, but i don't believe she was right in her belief that he only wanted another role in the hay. She in turn started choking him. True it may have ended differently(in a good way) were it not for Angel's interference, but we will never know. He at least has a good reason to not like Faith.
But Harry didn't know that, or if Buffy told him he ignored it. He ripped Xander just as much as Buffy, Willow and Giles in this chap.

Sorry for the rant, that was annoying and I needed to vent. I know this is an old story and what i say here doesn't really matter anymore but...
KnowInsight chapter 8 . 6/12/2019
nifty crossover and i really like how you saved faith and got her a family. :D
scottd92 chapter 8 . 6/9/2019
Awesome story
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 8 . 2/11/2019
Nicely handled
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 7 . 2/11/2019
Good treaty
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 6 . 2/11/2019
Glad faith was helped
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 5 . 2/11/2019
Nice that they tied the knot
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 4 . 2/11/2019
Nice
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 3 . 2/10/2019
Good chapter
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 2 . 2/10/2019
I wonder if there is cat hair in the cup when it turns back
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2018
If Harry was born in Godrick's hollow, he was born in westengland, which is not Whales but the bit south of it.
The Sound Shaman chapter 4 . 4/8/2018
This site seems to have silly rules with arbitrary enforcement. I've read loads of straight up porn on this site, and loads of grusome violence, and there doesn't seem to be any particular coherent framework for what sex is too sexy or what violence is too brutally detailed. Eh. Hollywood has very silly laws. Explicitly hang a village by their own intestines? PG-13. A few seconds of female nipples? Oh no, oh dear, moral anarchy.
The Sound Shaman chapter 3 . 4/8/2018
I feel like your Latin is a little wonky, but the 3rd person singular indicative active forms of that verb in perfect and present are identical. I feel like maybe you should have used legerit, the subjunctive form, or maybe an imperitive in there, an imperitive takes the base, ambulare to walk, slash the re add on an ite and now it's a command, "walk". I'm fuzzy on Latin grammar, and not sure how magic may or may not alter the grammar. And while I studied Latin for around 7 years, I've forgotten like 95 percent of what I learned, so there's a decent chance you got it right and I'm incorrectly reassembling bits of grammar. Thanks for the free entertainment.
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