Please update, this was a very funny story and some of the ideas are just golden. It would be great if you could, there's not a lot of stories like this out there and this is definitely a good one. So to conclude, please update!

That was s L

so she noticed a 'disturbance in the force' you say

It was great especially since it didn't seem rushed so don't beat ur self up and say it's bad k. :)

Please continue

Hello! I know there are more chapters to this story and I am going to read them because this story seems like it's going interesting places, but I wanted to address one thing in this chapter particularly. In #15 on the list, "bisexual" was used to refer to Danielle posing as Danny. I am NOT attacking you or belittling you in any way, but I'd like to point out that "bisexual" means an attraction to more than on gender as in who you would like to be in a relationship with, not the gender of yourself. Just like how being "homosexual" is attraction to the same gender. That's the "-sexual" ending. I understood what you were going for with the whole Danielle/Danny thing, so using the phrase "I will not try to convince people I had gender reassignment using Danielle" is the correct way to phrase what you're going for. "Gender reassignment" would mean surgery that could cause Danny to look like Danielle with boobs and such.

Otherwise, the grammar and spelling are on point largely in this chapter, and it seems like your plot is going in a good direction. (But let's be real, any fic without Phantom Planet is already going in a good direction, right?) Keep writing!

- Anony

I really liked this, and would love it if you continue since I really want to see how everyone reacts when they learn who Danny Phantom really is lol.

Ahhhhh... I love this so much! that was so cool! I love how they actually performed the opening theme song (with some changes) for the talent show also, it's awesome how Tucker and Sam actually have alter egos too! So cool! I bet they look awesome! you did a great job describing the concert! That sounds like it was so cool! Man... How could Amity Park not know who they are after that awesome performance?! But I'm sure they will surprise me and be completely clueless XD hahaha... I'm guessing they think it's cgi or something XD lol XD It would definitely be interesting to see what other people are thinking about the performance. And whether people are starting to think they are team phantom (they literally just said it but I doubt they will accept it so easily... Lol) XD anyways, awesome chapter and I will be looking toward to the next one!

You should have a reaction chapter. Various pov's of students who watched them

OH MY GOODNESS WOW. I DID NOT EXPECT THAT! OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ARE THE PEOPLE WATCHING STUPID ENOUGH TO NOT GET IT? OR DID THEY ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND?

Amazing, could use work on paragraphing but still hilarious to read, also what's a crappie?

I love how you used the intro song for their talent show! And the comment about sidekicks, sorry not sidekicks, partners *cough* Young Justice *cough* was awesome. I like that you included Dani in the talent show too

Hahaha XD I'm looking so forward to seeing what will happen next XD I'm sure the talent show will be great XD lol Awesome chapter! I couldn't stop laughing XD

Great story! I've laughed out loud in public multiple times while reading this and now I'm getting weird look...eh, worth it.
I can't wait for someone to go up on stage and sing the DP theme song for the talent show XD!

Dew eet.