| Reviews for 15 Second Genocide |
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This is great chapter 25 . 2/5/2017 Who are you kiddin', kiddo? This is great! Seriously, there's little to no grammatical \spelling errors(which is more than I can say for 90% of the fanfictions I've binge-read), a nice plot and in depth character, the sum of which's parts make a nice little back story. Stop being such a perfectionist. I kid thee not when I say THIS IS FANTABULOSO! |
THIS IS SO GREAT chapter 25 . 1/27/2017 Seriously! Read the title! This was fun ta page through. I've recently been (binge) reading UT fabrics on this site and can honestly say this is one of the better ones. You don't want to know what the bad ones were Aaaaand anyhoo, I also HIGHLY HIGHLY recommend the Hanplates by zarla on deviantart. I like how everyone has different opinions on Sans and the skelebros, and also definitely to the power of absolutely Gaster. Keep up the great writing! |
Guest chapter 25 . 7/17/2016 Darker yet darker original lyrics by KHTTL13 |
Guest chapter 25 . 6/18/2016 NOOOOOOOO ITS OVER AHHHHHH |
Mada-Scarpath chapter 25 . 6/18/2016 You did it! You completed a really good fic! Now what? Go complete a NEW fic. Yup. I'll give you some advice that a lot of Undertale fic authors don't think about enough. When you feel that a story is done, then nine times outta ten, it is best to call it done. You force it, you might just kill it. So take a review biscuit. |
Guest chapter 24 . 6/13/2016 Woah, this is one of the BEST fanfics I have ever read! |
Guest chapter 23 . 6/13/2016 dark, darker, yet darker. the darkness keeps growing. the shadows cutting deeper. photon readings negative. this next experiment seems very, very interesting. what do you two think? -entry 17 |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/13/2016 that is extremely alarming. and that trust was INCREDIBLY ill advised! |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/13/2016 well, who knows how good their eyesight is? if the guards are dogs, and they probably are in snowdin, they can't see to well. they cold smell him, but is it ever explained how they even know what a human smells like? |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/13/2016 oh no something is F0LL0WING HIM this is not good N0T G00D |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/13/2016 what is with the weird 8r8ks? so annoyin. if you're makin somethin like this, do not 8r8k it up, it looks weidr. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2016 ugh. what happened? |
Commanding After Dark chapter 10 . 6/11/2016 I'm hoping for a Undyne thinking Sans is cute moment. |
Commanding After Dark chapter 4 . 6/10/2016 AUGH! The parenthesis are giving ME headaches! |
Commanding After Dark chapter 2 . 6/10/2016 ... What's with the (stop)/(start) filler? It's breaking up the story. |