Update PLEASE

Subarashii

Ward

love it keep do it

So uh, are we ever actually gonna see team rwby again? Or winter for that matter? If not, then you should remove them as tags.

Honestly, my thought is that this is developing too slowly if your planning on having them go to beacon. 33k words in and she’s still 14? By the time she gets to beacon it’ll have been 100k words, and that’s just plainly too much.

I do love the character development, I just think that you’re taking too long to establish their relationships instead of actually advancing the story and plot.

seriously, i'm just sitting here imagining Hima being the next Lindsey Stirline or Taylor Davis and playing the violin version of "only my railgun" (i reccomend checking it out when you can if you haven't heard it before) like a pro considering the ridiculous speed the song it needs to be played back. this is a really good chapter. keep it up! and please update soon

l realy like this story i wonder wen you get back to the events of volume 1

This is really, really good. As. Freaking. ALWAYS.
However, there is just one little thing I would like to politely request. I read your first version of this story, of how Ozpin figures out and tells Hima that she has to give up her secret or she’ll be kicked out of Beacon. Well, I really don’t want you to do that. No offense, but now that we know more about Ozpin, I think he would be more the type to figure out a plausible theory that is very close to the truth, but he won’t say a thing, preferring to keep his silence—quietly plotting all the angles in his head all the while—after imparting ominous words of advice/warning that will have Hima thinking “oh s***, does he know?” Sorry, but that was bugging me. Ozpin straight up confronting Hima out of the blue without prior consideration (*cough* plotting *cough*) is just not his style if you ask me. I understand that it’s your story and therefore you are entitled to how you want to write it, but I figured that I’d at least say something. I’m open for being a sounding board if you want to though.
Anyways, I do however love the creative liberty you took with her weapon as well as the realistic reactions of Blake and Ilia. Very believable. Please keep on writing and update as soon as humanly—or inhumanly (just kidding)—possible.

I don't know why, but I like it when Adam's mother mode activates :3

love it

I’m I full support of this, and glad to see it back. Keep up your brilliant work.

Yes, Chapters 10 and 11 of Volume 3 were my least favorite for those reasons. Adam was one of my favorite characters before they sabotaged him to make him an easily hateable character. Glad to see someone else agrees

I agree with you on the part that turning Adam into the creepy ex just to kill him was a waste of potential on his character's development, but for some reason it seems that RT hates read-heads, so we gotta pray for Nora to survive the readheads purge :')

Please update again soon. This is getting really good. Ridiculously good.

A great chapter, love what you did with the "Adam Charaktere short scene" and I am seriusly exited how this is going to continue