Please update soon!

Finding out your rewriting this too literally just made my day.
And yeah, you did achieve that very well, and it also makes us feel Elitas pain a lot more after reading her interactions with Cliff (IT HURTS) Good job! :D

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON
oh no I really liked cliffjumper so sad when went offline on the first episode

I hated how he died not even 10 min in ans some dieds! Anyways this was a great chapter! Can't wait for more keep up the good work!

Very nice chapter and presentation of Elita's life.I can't wait to see true hell work.

Only two chapters and I'm already in love with this story! Can't wait to read more with her as a teenager, and I adore the her relationship with the bots. I'm really looking forward to seeing what parts of TFA your going to be putting in this.

Wow this is amzing I can't I can't wait for the next chapter!

Very good and cute chapter, i can't wait to see whath else Elite will change in this beatiful you're right, while is very funny see reincarnated charachters(even if this isn't the case) complain about how annoying is childhood, better drop up the good work and see you later.

P.s. those holograms are an headcanon of your or whath?And they're solid? Because i never saw them in any series(but i've to watch g1, so i could be wrong).

P.p.s.I advice you the crossover of my friends sakuralovelight beetween Prime and RWBY, if you don't know, is awesome.

LOVE IT!

Nice beginning, i hope you will continue this.

Keep going I like it

Please come back to us and update.

pleeease continue its amazing book XD

The story and concept is pretty cool however you might want to balance it out a bit
(also no offense but you might want to change your OC a bit, Jenna is tipping a bit towards Mary sue teritory).

You must update! My sanity relies on these stories!