Reviews for Magic Mishap
missy chapter 8 . 6/7/2019
can i adopt this story if your not writing it anymore? its really good
Guest chapter 8 . 7/19/2018
More chapters please for the love of all the delicious chocolates and pastas in the universe, I AM BEGGING YOU!
KannonX chapter 8 . 1/21/2018
This is really good, I hope it’s being continued!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2016
A great fanfic. It has lots of potential.
The only error i found was that in france's speech; sometimes you write 'he' not omitting the 'h' and sometimes you write 'e omitting the 'h' .
blackcatyaoi chapter 7 . 10/11/2016
I can't wait for then next chapter !
Guest chapter 7 . 9/6/2016
Duuuuuude it was so cute with Fruk and the FACE Family :( I love PrUk too but it was just the type of story it was. I weird to make to super PrUk all of the sudden in this chapter. Kinda just straight to it. England and Prussia never met as kids they met closer to their teens. I would say closer to the pirate age. When you mentioned Prussia in the other chapters with Russia I though you meant Russia instead of Prussia. I'm sorry if I'm being straight forward and sounding mean I really don't try to :( I love the story and your writing. And I love how you have cute moments like with Russia and China and Japan. It would be cute to have a moment with Prussia and Spain and Romano too. And I know it's your story and don't want to tell you how to write it (I just feel like it's how it's sounding and I'm not good at writing reviews.. ) I say just don't just straight into pruk like in this chapter. Like the way it slowly got to America and Canada at first. But to suddenly think of him and want him was too fast of a push. with how the story was going France wouldn't have ignored england and focus on the computer knowing england was small and having not being able to see him for a week. He would have worried and went straight to england as soon as Japan arrived. And America would have tried to apologize to england instead of just getting mad at France because of how guilty he felt before. And America said "brothers stick together" France wouldn't just ignore england after what happened and America would just stand there. Prussia if he really was with England when he was a kid with his brothers. Wouldn't have let england suffer that either with his attitude. Prussia wasn't that kind of person. Unless he was also scared of them maybe bit he got mad about the rabbit he wouldn't have went to the brothers and told them a thing or two. ( Honestly I still love the UK brothers but still) I'm so sorry for writing alot and I really love the story it just moved too fast :(
SwordMasterZ chapter 7 . 8/17/2016
little England is so cute
Yami-chan chapter 6 . 7/31/2016
I love how you structured England's past into the story, and how you express his relationships with the other countries! This story is so cute, and has sad moments that tug at your heart, but heart warming moments as well. Please update this story, I would love to see it's completion in the future!
Fangirl3333 chapter 6 . 7/13/2016
SO GOOD! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
fnaffanmangle chapter 6 . 7/1/2016
"He's the only family I have"
*Canada fuming in the distance*
But seriously, I really like this story! I love how you show England having flashbacks of his own childhood, it really expands on his character!
RandomBloodstone chapter 6 . 6/30/2016
it is so cute!
espeon64 chapter 6 . 6/21/2016
The story is so cute, but dear God the paragraphs are enormous
3p italy chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
cute...overload...akkk...rip 3p italy died from cute child england
Im Sh00k chapter 5 . 6/6/2016
This Chapter made me cry Waaaah :c 10/10 best FrUK story that doesn't make France seem like a dirty perv... Can't wait for the next update!
Rising from the Ashes YOLT chapter 3 . 5/27/2016
Adorbs!
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