Reviews for Divergent Point
BigRig2.0 chapter 4 . 6/20
Nope
Hoshi124 chapter 4 . 5/12/2018
Sorry, to many time travelers.
Deleted717 chapter 30 . 6/25/2017
I love your action scene here. They're quite difficult to write and track for both author and reader, but I think you did a fine job!
Silly Thoughts chapter 21 . 2/20/2017
I keep asking myself Why is it department of ministries rather than the department of mysteries in this story it feels weird?
tanzar81 chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
You melted my brain. Good job!
4everfictional chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
I wonder if Tonks is a time traveler too, and, if so, whether she was from a timeline where she and Lupin got together.
4everfictional chapter 4 . 12/30/2016
It probably depends on which Weasley it is, what the Sirius in this timeline is like, if he is from this timeline, and the same factors I just applied to Sirius being applied to the rat.
4everfictional chapter 3 . 12/30/2016
I imagine it'll be difficult to keep up with all the different timelines, but I'm definitely hoping for the best.
4everfictional chapter 2 . 12/30/2016
I was not expecting that.
4everfictional chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
I'm excited to see where the initial change in the timeline occurred! XD
Riniko22 chapter 65 . 12/24/2016
Buying the Chudley Cannons? Well there couldn't be much cost incurred there.
mordicus18 chapter 53 . 9/16/2016
Hi, i m always eager to follow the story and frustrated by some part of almost all the chapter. I undrstands harry is trying to be a good leader and it s not just automaticly after the merging but it s so frustrating,he seemed not changed at all, it s like the same mind set which made him captured all over again. And i accepted it s maybe just me who is frustrated of him not winning a battle and let it slide.
But there is one bigger mindblowing thing i thought is false or maybe it is me who isn't right. When you talked about the trace...is it the trace about non adult wizard who cannot perform magic outside the school? I think it was explained in previous chapter but isn't the trace ON the wand not the wizard from the original? And even if it was on a person, the trace could be blocked by wards no? And it was the only excuse you made su non-active? And what about the potions? Runes? Minions? There is a limitless possibilities in jk universe and the trace was for me a bit lame.
Lliono chapter 33 . 9/13/2016
spoiler* I understood what happened until they leglimenced the unspeakable. Then something apparently was wrong and suddenly harry was being interrogated. I can honestly say I am very lost
mordicus18 chapter 47 . 9/4/2016
I m not sure if harry is a main protagonist but he has been played again and again. I know he isn't mister perfect but after these chapter it would be more good if harry is removed from the equation. Here, he is so easly outsmarted by almost everybody, it makes me doubt his exitence in reincarnated cycle. He is prone to error but add all his error and it is colossal. I thought at least he changed after the event of the fidelius, and be more careful but noooooo, i accepted they use me and do my thing like before i was cursed and not beinf more paranoid. It s this continual non-evolution of harry s that make me really pissed, dudley is more leader and prone to the thinking, harry should rest emprisonned.
mordicus18 chapter 36 . 8/20/2016
I don't know if it was deliberate or not but harry wasn't really smart in this chapter from the beginning and in the end. And with the verbal proposition, didn't he learned? what are the reason why should the captain make him seeker now that he gave the wand. And if harry thoughts about threatening the upper year, the captain could use it to make a solid complaint to make him expelled, harry has no more power here now that dumbledore anymore, he isn't at hogwarts to make him stay. So what good reason harru think that he can order them without leverage? So why he is confindent?
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