Reviews for Critical love
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2018
jajaa esos dos jaja y sus amigos jaja son la muerte jaja
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
JAJA NADA COMO CONFESAR POR SI ACA JAJA ESE NICK
TheMultigeek chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
Really good. Could have been longer. But still really gripping and emotional.
MrAndersIversen chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Awesome story! I really thought much myself to write a similar story and therefore hope you wouldn't mind if I did so because I've had idea stuck on my head the last days before I even knew this story existed :) I hope you'll text me and let me know if you're down with it :)

Sincerely your Danish friend, MrAndersIversen :)
Luisa chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
IT IS AMAZING!
Conan.212 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
It was not bad.
munchingpotatoes123 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
*reads first paragraph* Well, that escalated quickly.
SassyPancham chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
Don't be so humble, it was great. Scary, yet cute moment between the two. Keep up the good fics!
Lemon Moons chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Two thumbs up! I kind of want this to continue, but I understand if you don't want to.
luli585 chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
it was fluffy and adorable and I loved reading it
Edger230 chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Aww! How sweet! What a great story!
Fantasyever chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
it was pretty good
CookieM2012 chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
This didnt suck! This was awesome! Kepp going!
Major Wolf chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
It wasn't bad. The first 75% of it seemed a little rushed. But after that there was a good amount of emotion at the end. Nice job.
~MW