It was a good story but the ending could use some work it is just that it felt like you cut it off in the middle of the story. It is good for a intro into a very good story. People in the end would be left wondering if sesshomaru gets kagome in the end, what his response is to her statement and how does he work around her insecurities. I am not trying to be rude or sound condescending in any way, I believe you have the potential to be an excellent writer. I just wanted you to know my thoughts on the matter

please add on! its a beautiful story and it really hits the feels!

That's it!? You gotta add to it.

oh wow that was just wow poor kagome