I have to say, I really want expecting to like this fic for the simple reason that I typically don't like OCs. However, you've got me. They seemed to jump in there a little quick with the explanations and friendships but the plot is interesting and the twin thing is written quite well. You write well and the descriptions and place seem on track, too. So great job! I hope this is a fic that is finished, as I'm already excited for it and have been disappointed by such good stories that are abandoned later on. Keep it up!

ooooo James sounds Jealous and again i love this story :D

ahhhhhhh I love this story plsssss pls tell me you're going to update soon :)

Now it makes more sense, but poor girls! This was a good chapter, and I'm curious to see how are you going to explain to James their pain in seeing his face, or if you're even going to acknowledge it! Either way this is exciting.
Oh, and in the phrase "'Too be honest?" (in a Graciela/Hermione dialogue), I think you meant "To be honest?" instead of Too. Great work!

This looks really good so far! I'm curious to see where you're going with this.
The only constructive criticism I have is the small details you make like "yeah, she was American too" that stray a bit far from the tone of the story.
Other than that, why did you feel that it was necessary for them to share scars? They might be twins but a wizard can torture one and not the other, or torture both just with different curses! I agree with the memories, I just want to understand the scars better.
Anyway it's my two cents, and in the end it's your story, and I'm liking it all the same. Great work, keep going and I'm excited for an update!