Reviews for Breathless
FanAddicted2000 chapter 5 . 9/17/2017
I'm rereading and crying all over again ! such a great story, probably the greatest !
thewulf-aloha4ever chapter 7 . 5/31/2017
Fantastic story! It was very moving and beautifully sensual.
Anonymous189 chapter 2 . 4/6/2017
The line "Three: A fucked-out Killian Jones is the hottest thing she's ever seen." Has to be the best visual ever! If for nothing else in this story, thank you!

However, I'm really liking the story too, even without that line.
FanAddicted2000 chapter 7 . 2/19/2017
I don't think I have the words to say how beautiful your story was. Everything was great, honestly I don't see any flaws... If it was another writer, I probably would think there are too many love scene, but yours aren't just about sex and need, they are about love and confort and passion and so much more ! I'm very pleased you deal with how Killian cope with all he has been through. And the tether spell was such a great idea ! So powerful but with its limits. You made me want to cry a lot of time, made me smile and laugh and so on. Well done writing !
singingisfun chapter 7 . 2/14/2017
This is, quite possibly, one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read. I'm so sorry I missed it while you were posting it! You have a true gift for pacing without forfeiting emotional moments. And your love scenes are incredible - the perfect balance of feeling and naughtiness. Sometimes, when I read fic, it's like the writer is just going for the shock value, and they forget that the best part isn't the sex itself, it's the emotional connection that goes along with the physical. But yours... wow. Simply gorgeous on all fronts! Excellent job.

Now, excuse me while I go binge read everything else you've written.
multifandomshipper92 chapter 6 . 10/22/2016
Freaking cant too many feels...
multifandomshipper92 chapter 5 . 10/22/2016
Cant stop crying...my heart is breaking
multifandomshipper92 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
Just realized i read this story already on ao3 lol xD but still loved it the second time! Very hott xD
tnplh chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
Oh this was a very nice piece of truly emotional smut but I don't want to call it smut because it's too pretty for that word. Really, really beautiful.
Spellman chapter 7 . 4/24/2016
Wow, that was an emotional roller coaster and I just loved your writing. Thank you for that and excellent work!
Alexandra Lyman chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Everything about this story is amazing. I'm utterly spellbound by it.
LadyGrey05 chapter 7 . 4/9/2016
Amazing story. Yheir love is so pure in this.
snoopykid chapter 7 . 4/8/2016
Loved this story! U my friend r awesome!
RhizOneill chapter 7 . 4/8/2016
Awww so perfect. I have really enjoy reading this so much. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Katydid42 chapter 7 . 4/7/2016
This was the most beautifully written piece for these two. You made me laugh and cry multiple times and I cannot put my love of this story into words. Be proud of this piece! I hope that the show does nearly as good a job of addressing Killian'a trauma as you did.
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