That was so excellent! And so sad! Nice to see you're back! I've missed you! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

uhhhh first off i'd like to say that it is currently 2:35 in the morning right now but that ain't stopping me from saying what i gotta say. second, thank you for reviving my love for this pairing in fire emblem. third, it's okay if you take a long time. you have a life to live and that's your number one priority.

forth, to platum in the comments section, fuck you.

anyways... wow. your writing is so, so beautiful. you really know how to weave words into someone's heart, and i couldn't tear my eyes off this masterpiece of a chapter. i could feel the raw emotions from nishiki when he repeated flannel's name and just... damn.

seeing flannel being whisked away against his will from the charm and nishiki being driving into madness for so long just tugged my heartstrings. i had no clue what was gonna happen next so i kept hoping that it'll get better for him, but nishiki's now traumatized :(( it'll definitely take time for him to be his cheeky self again.

i lowkey hope that vilra was captured by flannel so she can get quadruple the amount of ass whoopin that nishiki got lmao

ps, I think there was a typo somewhere at the beginning? It said "mus" but I think you meant "must"? sorry if im wrong it's late at night.

That was excellent! Please update soon! I can't wait for more!

This was a great chapter and a big plot twist! Keep on writing! :)

Oh so Keaton ends with Peri and Kaden with Orochi? I thought Keaton and Kaden where gonna end up together, Orochi doesn't deserve Kaden after all her crap. That was excellent! Please update soon! I'm so glad you came back! It's been over a year! So nice to see you've updated!

I love this story! I love your characterization, and how you did not make the females into annoying, jealous side characters. They have purpose and meaning, and I love that! Can't wait for more!

Sooo, is it safe to assume that this story won't be continued?

Well, this has certainly been more than a month... Did you decide to give this story up?

That was excellent! Please update soon! I can't wait for more!

That was excellent! Please update soon! I can't wait for more! Keaton/Kaden is the best ship of the game!

Woah, whoever you are Platum, you are clearly braindead. Yes, present tense, not as you said "I remember when I was [...] Braindead." If you really think so about , then you're at the wrong place. There is nothing wrong about homosexual stories, a huge part of most fanbases actually prefer them. And judging this story because of that is pretty shortsighted. I could stop here, as I know that at that point you wouldn't bother to hear me out anymore but whatever. Also, what gives you the right to bash such a well-written story and write it of as unintelligently? If it's due to the homosexuality then you're clearly homophobic (or simply distaste it. Who knows, maybe you are just salty that Keaton x Kaden (Flannel x Nishiki) endangers your otp?). If it's due to "It won't get you far"-shenanigans as it lacks "intellect", then you're probably applying double-standards here as pretty much 40% of is romance (probably more :/) but you don't bother bashing those, because they involve heterosexual pairings, I guess? Also, what gives you the right to act all high and mighty when there seems to be nothing on this site coming from you? Did you write even one fanfiction in your life or better yet did you ever even contribute to this site? Probably not, if your pseudo-cool "Heh, I am a judge [...]"-line was any indicator. Lame and really clichée...

Fresh off the boat, from reddit, kid? heh I remember when I was just like you. Braindead. Lemme give you a tip so you can make it in this cyber sanctuary: never make stories like that. You got no reputation here, you got no name, you got jackshit here. It's survival of the fittest and you ain't gonna survive long on by saying stupid gay stories that your little hugbox cuntsucking reddit friends would upboat. None of that here. You don't upboat. You don't downboat. This ain't reddit, kid. This is fanfiction dot net. We have REAL intellectual stories, something I don't think you're all that familiar with. You don't like it, you can hit the bricks on over to imgur, you daily show watching son of a bitch. I hope you don't tho. I hope you stay here and learn our ways. Things are different here, unlike any other place that the light of internet pop culture reaches. You can be anything here. Me ? heh, I'm a judge.. this place... this place has a lot to offer... heh you'll see, kid . . . that is if you can handle it...

No. No, Orochi, No! Don't do the prayer thing while you're in the middle of a bad luck streak, you're going to make it worse!

I may want to recruit Velour but not at the cost of Saitama's heart...

You know what, I take my statement from earlier back. I wouldn't follow and fav this story and I wouldn't follow and fav it twice either... I'd follow it thrice! Seriously, I kept checking for an update twice a day whilst going through some possible words and scenarios. And now that you've decided to go on, I'm as giddy as whenever I'm reading a good story (I actually started reading Lethality, too. A really sttange pairing, those two can't even support in the main game and only really talk with each other in the Summer Scramble DLC. But hey, as long as it works, I'm not complaining~ Also, Gaius is among my favourite characters while Henry IS my favourite one, so that's a plus!)

That was excellent! Please update soon! Poor Flannel! I hope he'll be alright.