Reviews for Ben 10: Justice Incarnate
Guest chapter 12 . 7/31
Please update please
Guest chapter 12 . 7/29
Please update
Fantasy Queen38 chapter 12 . 7/22
I Ben going to start with looking after the Team in this fic or is he going to do something else?
bulk Locke the the grim head chapter 12 . 7/16
i think it would be cool to see the ben be a sorta filed mentor teaching the kids how to properly work and adapt as a team also i hope you don't turn it into a harem i got not problems with ben enjoying the single life life I but it be nice if if was single romance even if its not a big part of the story
The3rdOverlord chapter 12 . 7/14
I need moar
Legend slayer chapter 12 . 7/10
Hey could you make Ben tell about the time he defeat ah puch, Maya god of death it will make the justice league very impress since he do it when he ten year old, especially wonder woman. Also please update this story hurry
SAZIA WAHID chapter 12 . 7/9
I thing the romance is being kinda too much. A fan fiction still can be great without romance in fact it can be different than all other fan fictions. You can see the real crossovers of superheroes most of them doesn't has any romance or just a little bit of it. So you shouldn't give the romance too much of a stretch. I mean Ben has girlfriend in his dimension so why is he dating others that is straight up cheating on a great relationship of him with Jullie. and there is only few of Ben's interaction with the justice league and young justice where we are mainly here for that and he even if he meets them he meets them after a lot ice and fire are interesting characters. but there are a lot more interesting characters like Best Boy, Martian Manhunter, Green Lantern, Nightwing and a lot more they are quite similar in many ways. and even still if you wanted to include romance there are better love interests like Barbara, Zattana, Starfire e.t.c. Also ben transforms into aliens only very few times and even when he does he stays that alien for most of tme and barely even switches. and most of the transformations are the ordinary ones. You said there is new aliens, ultimate aliens and new function. But we didn't got to see any of those except for the A.I. one. You said Ben will use magic but we are so far and he hasn't for once. We are so far and Ben has scanned DNA of some justice league member but hasn't transformed into one yet. There's barely few actions and transformations. Ben doesn't have any secret identity and that's what makes him more unique and different than other characters even if he is in DC. Others should know there's a very powerful shapeshifting hero who saved the universe and the multiverse is here. Everyone should know and understand there's a powerful hero barer of the most powerful weapon stronger than the green lantern corp combined is here. Why is Trying to earn money and live here he should have interacted with them at first and stopped bad guys because he wants to save people and there are superheroes who saves people. And the way you made it look Ben is stuck in this dimension where he can travel dimensions using clockwork or alien x so the situation doesn't fit. I was starting to get a lot interested in the story at first but now I am starting to lose my interest because of lack of transformations, actions and the faults above.
MythicalParadox chapter 12 . 7/10
I think I've reread this story three times. now. It's so well written, and I llike the direction the story is going.

I really hope that Ben does not joined the Team, or any teams at all, and stays independent for awhile. Unless he makes his own.

Him joining the sidekicks would feel like a downgrade from his normal hero life, and I don't think he's the type of person to let people he doesn't know, boss him around. Unless his Grandpa is with them.

Quick question, and sorry if it's already been answered, did the Omnitrix scan Martian, and Kryptonian DNA?

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Sazia Wahid chapter 4 . 7/9
I THINK YOU SHOULD PAIR BEN WITH DIANA OR BARBARA . BUT I WOULD LIKE TO SEE DIANA THE MOST.
Sazia Wahid chapter 3 . 7/9
in the omniverse, primus doesn't exist anymore. as we have heard from man of action the DNA of the aliens are computerized inside of the omnitrix.
Sean chapter 12 . 7/5
Hey since you make this is a adult Ben have master control and know everything about omnitrix could you make Ben have other enhanced mode like omni-kix in the reboot according Duncan Rouleau it do exit in classic series omnitrix. And since he is one of real creator of Ben 10 it definitely true not like derrick j. wyatt who i think most of his claimed is bullshit and not true. Oh and please update this story soon
Rhenam chapter 7 . 7/1
vilao heroi, he befriends everyone
Rhenam chapter 6 . 7/1
I'm even watching the story turn, ben 10: conquer the dc universe
Rhenam chapter 5 . 7/1
in fact I spent a good part of the chapter imagining Harley in the shower but I loved the conversation on Alien x
Rhenam chapter 4 . 7/1
Earth hunter ( marciano), super-10 (Kryptoniano)
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