Oh my God! It’s official, of all the fanfics you have involving various characters and couples, this one is my favorite one by far! It’s curious though since I don’t really like western themes. I don’t know, they never really appeal to me, so finding this piece and ended up loving it the way I do was a nice surprise. I started reading it without a much enthusiasm, but by the end of the first chapter I was utterly hooked.

I loved absolutely everything from this. The plot and sub-plots were incredible. I’m amazed at the way you made the original DBZ story line successfully fit this one. The way Goku was a former hustler from the famous Saiyan group was awesome, and the way Raditz went to the West City to retrieve him was great too. And that’s just one little part in the story. I’m actually impressed you manged to get so many things into the story. The matter with Tien and his problem with the Saloon, the issue with Gero’s family and the Bounty hunter Cell, the Saiyans running and hiding, the great threat of Frieza, and even those beautiful moments with Piccolo and Gohan. OMG! Those were my favorites by far. My bias is talking here though, so don’t mind me.

You really have a wonderful imagination, and while I truly enjoyed every single piece that knit the whole story, I must totally compliment you for the characters. You do them so well, oh my gosh, I’m so envious. I mentioned how much I loved Piccolo and Gohan’s interactions, but I pretty much enjoyed every relationship and interaction between characters. I especially found delightful every time you graced us with a little bit of romance.

Gochi moments were amazing and packed of so much mixed feelings, I loved them so much, but what’s new? Vegebul is always funny to me and here it was more because of the circumstances, haha. Actually, that part with Bulma being kidnapped was hilarious and one of my favorites, especially the whole issue with the Ginyu Force. Omg, I was so glad you got them into the story. I really like them, it doesn’t matter they were there just for a bit. The stuff with Krillin and 18 had me smiling every time. I find them to be very sweet, but I guess I do have a soft spot for them. And the Tien/Launch pairing continue to surprise me. Thanks to you I’m getting pretty invested in this ship, hm. You managed them so well and made Launch so loyal to him that… Agh, my heart! It’s precious. Ah, those little moments with Gohan and Videl were cute as well.

The action was great. Now, I have to confess I’m not the best reading gory stuff. Imagining lots of blood it’s not my strong fort, but curiously enough, I didn’t find bothersome the blood here. I guess it is different reading someone getting killed by gunshots than by being teared up apart with guts and flesh splashing here and there. But man if I wasn’t surprised for all the death you gave us. I know death was pretty common on western times, but boy, it was a shock. The death I was more shocked about was Chiaotzu. I did not see that coming. Poor Tien, that was devastating to him, and then you almost killed Launch too. I’m glad you didn’t because that would’ve been to much for the guy. He deserves happiness. The one I was taking for dead but ended up alive was Raditz haha.

Well, I think I’ve rambled enough. I don’t have more to say other than repeat myself: I truly enjoyed this fanfic a lot, and without doubts it goes to favorites right now. It’s always an utter pleasure reading you. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care.

I liked the ending. I felt sorry for Raditz for most of the fic so I was glad he got accepted.

Great story and very well written. I loved it.

thanks for the story dude! it was a good read

perfect!

I liked this story.

Touching moment between Launch and Tien. Of course I love the Sons interaction...

it's great that almost everyone made it

I was at the edge of my sit while reading this chapter. Very engaging chapter...

Nooooo say it aint soooo. Say it aint oveeeerrrr.

Really good story, I def enjoyed reading it. Hope to see more from you soon.

I am very happy to see who killed Frieza. Great update!

oh the tension!

Short chapter but great nonetheless. The suspense is killing me. I can't wait until the next chapter.

This story is getting more exciting by every update...

Cliffhanger!